Maple:The Day it Ends Chapter 4.
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thread starter FatalWeek Aug 02 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
HEY! Read this first! Welcome to Chapter Four, if you have not read either chapter one, two or three, please return to. Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 -Be courteous, be nice. -Enjoy your read. CHAPTER FOUR: A Faithful Encounter We landed inside the landing bay. It almost seemed too easy. Something bad was going to happen; I could feel it in the air. I wish I had known what lay ahead before I went on this mission. �Colonel Cohner, everything seems... too easy.� David said. �I know what you mean, Brigadier General, but that doesn�t explain the lack of guards.� said Alex as he stepped out of the ship. �David, just stick to the orders. Lt. Andy, do you have the blueprints for this ship?� I asked. �They�re right here, Colonel.� �Good. David, take the elevator to the control room, I�ll go see if he�s in the board.� As the two teams split up, I felt that it was the wrong decision on my part. I knew this was too suspicious to be true. �Brigadier General David, I repeat, Brigadier General David, we have a visual on a group in the board.� �Colonel Cohner, there seems to be at least a score of people.� �Watch yourself David, I know you like to be the hero. This time, make sure you have complete control in the control room.� �Will do.� As we stormed the room, they were all just privates. Worthless scum. The General wasn�t down here, but then...where? �Colonel Cohner, have you apprehended the General? Control room is empty.� �Copy that. All clear down here. I�ll take these prisoners into the control room. Stay there until everyone is there.� �Cohn.. someth... is happen.... No ahhh...... (Cuts to static.)� �David? David! Can you read me? Oh god, group, kill these maggots and get to the control room now!� We searched the bodies, and then rushed to the control room. We found the squad. Dead. I rushed to the Brigadier General to see if he was still alive. �Oh God, David, are you there?� David was hacking blood, barely alive. �Cohner... you�ve got to get out of here. Ask Admiral Boxwala, he knows this threat better than all of us. Cohner, before I go, you�re going to be the new Brigadier General.� �No, don�t go, David, we can get you back to base. Just a few patches and�� �It�s too late for that. I�ve lived a long enough life. I�ve done my duty as Brigadier. Goodbye, old buddy.� As the last breath of life escapes him, a sudden rush of fear goes down my spine. He didn�t tell me what to tell Boxwala. I look around vigorously for some sort of sign. I look in his hands, to find only a pendant. It has the inscription of 01-X. This is what he wanted me to tell Admiral. - Start Log 83 - David, my old friend, he�s gone. Damn-it! I knew we never should have gone different ways. I don�t know what nightmarish fiend would do that to David. This is not Broa, there�s no way. Broa would never attack Bera with such cold hands. - End Log 83 - �Colon-- I mean, Brigadier General Cohner, are you okay?� Jason asked me. �I�m okay, we just need to get out of here before I lose the rest o
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areodon 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
-Reading- Saving spot.
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FatalWeek 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I hope you guys are pumped for Chapter 5 ^-^
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areodon 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
AMAZING! That was so dramatic!1!
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FatalWeek 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thank you. I was trying for that.
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bandducky511 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
This is amazing. :D I wonder who the heck is "Maria"
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FatalWeek 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] bandducky511 : This is amazing. :D I wonder who the heck is "Maria" [/quote] If you jump back to Chapter 2, she was the refugee that was found under rubble in Windia. Maria isn't who you think she is at all.
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mippon 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
can i be the narwhal then
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areodon 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I was thinking Maria would be your girlfriend. WHY? Why did she do that!
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FatalWeek 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Mippon NO! There's not Narwhals in this. Areodon If you expect it, it's not fun.
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areodon 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
yeah that makes sense....
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Sakujuana 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Nooo! You really did get me killed. You better kill Maria for my sake. >=] Shes evil. EVIL.
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FatalWeek + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] Sakujuana : Nooo! You really did get me killed. You better kill Maria for my sake. >=] Shes evil. EVIL. [/quote] Your killer is still unknown. But Maria knows who did it! Edit: Yes I am sorry you had to die David. But it thickens the plots.
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anisbro007 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
So, am I in the story yet? Lol? Hahahah, I want to know what my 'perfect part' is. xD
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FatalWeek 08/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] anisbro007 : So, am I in the story yet? Lol? Hahahah, I want to know what my 'perfect part' is. xD [/quote] You'll know when it comes.
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