My Father's Day Poem :D

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thread starter Metavek Jun 20 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Happy Father�s Day Fathers� an inspiration through coldest nights and heated days Through it all we should acknowledge this and give them a little praise Without them where would we be�lost in a spiralling daze? Aspiring to achieve, walking blindly into the haze Without them� we would simply be lost� And such is the cost But really when we will we finally realize we NEED them When all hope is lost? When you�re to your knees with broken dreams and heart and soul exhaust? Fathers will still be there� With arms wide open� Fathers they�re truly the best� By: Shane (MetaShinobi)

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NapalmDe4th 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

What the hell is up with all of those ellipses?

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KewlEH 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[feel free to plagiarize] lol no thanks

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OmgPanda 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Last line needs to be changed.

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gokuryu + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

u love ur father so much im starting 2 suspect some molestation involved

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enoch129 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This sounds like a rap/song. o_o' It's pretty good nonetheless.

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imadukeynow 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Son, i am disappoint

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Mike4281 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I don't like it. Must be my anti-poem detection going off. >>

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Common 06/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It sounds too like exaggerated I dunno how to really explain it