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song i wrote

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thread starter airgraff510 Aug 05 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

i keep dreaming of u and i cant take it i think im mistaken cuz i'm not sure if your taken but these dreams are all so sweet i don't want to be awaken so i lay here breaking and saying to myself stay asleep don't wake up cuz these moments with u are the best i feel so blest i don't wanna go on with my life wondering if ur thinking of me out there?somewhere? but i got to be strong and hang on but i realize now that i use to be mad all the time except for when i rhyme or think of u especially when i think of you it was mostly cuz i couldn't handle the truth but now i do but i'm still too blind cuz my mind cant see the good in u no matter how hard i try dear god plz don't cry 15 sec intermission plz love me and i will show u the truth how it is when i see you but right now i feel to blue just give me a clue if u want me or not cuz right now i feel like i just got shot by a bullet made of despair plz be aware that i see your tear droops cuz u and me are stuck in this endless loop never geting out unless we cope so plz corporate just once in our life i want u next to me forever and ever never leave me because if you do i dont know who i will be show me that you love me like i love you you insprie me to write, cuz this is the only way i know of telling you that i care for you

yeyoflx2 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

o god plz?

BloodDemon 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

kinda hard to sing it without music... but i guess this can be rap?

imapig 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Nice grammar, you'll sure get into the ball with that.

fortegunner3 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

sounds like a poem

MolyCows 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

He said, ��Son, Have you see the world? Well, what would you say If I said that you could? Just carry this gun and you��ll even get paid.�� I said, ��That sounds pretty good.�� Black leather boots Spit-shined so bright They cut off my hair but it looked alright We marched and we sang We all became friends As we learned how to fight A hero of war Yeah that��s what I��ll be And when I come home They��ll be damn proud of me I��ll carry this flag To the grave if I must Because it��s flag that I love And a flag that I trust I kicked in the door I yelled my commands The children, they cried But I got my man We took him away A bag over his face From his family and his friends They took off his clothes They pissed in his hands I told them to stop But then I joined in We beat him with guns And batons not just once But again and again A hero of war Yeah that��s what I��ll be And when I come home They��ll be damn proud of me I��ll carry this flag To the grave if I must Because it��s flag that I love And a flag that I trust She walked through bullets and haze I asked her to stop I begged her to stay But she pressed on So I lifted my gun And I fired away The shells jumped through the smoke And into the sand That the blood now had soaked She collapsed with a flag in her hand A flag white as snow A hero of war Is that what the see Just medals and scars So damn proud of me And I brought home that flag Now it gathers dust But it��s a flag that I love It��s the only flag I trust He said, ��Son, have you seen the world? Well what would you say, if I said that you could?�� My song hope you enjoyed

chathana 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

professionally, it'll typically need one more bridge and...about the chorus....? O.o

Mergaite 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

im still working on R&B song...already done,will post it in some time...

TheUltimaSin 08/05/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

MolyCows said: "He said, ��Son, Have you see the world? Well, what would you say If I said that you could? Just carry this gun and you��ll even get paid.�� I said, ��That sounds pretty good.�� Black leather boots Spit-shined so bright They cut off my hair but it looked alright We marched and we sang We all became friends As we learned how to fight A hero of war Yeah that��s what I��ll be And when I come home They��ll be damn proud of me I��ll carry this flag To the grave if I must Because it��s flag that I love And a flag that I trust I kicked in the door I yelled my commands The children, they cried But I got my man We took him away A bag over his face From his family and his friends They took off his clothes They pissed in his hands I told them to stop But then I joined in We beat him with guns And batons not just once But again and again A hero of war Yeah that��s what I��ll be And when I come home They��ll be damn proud of me I��ll carry this flag To the grave if I must Because it��s flag that I love And a flag that I trust She walked through bullets and haze I asked her to stop I begged her to stay But she pressed on So I lifted my gun And I fired away The shells jumped through the smoke And into the sand That the blood now had soaked She collapsed with a flag in her hand A flag white as snow A hero of war Is that what the see Just medals and scars So damn proud of me And I brought home that flag Now it gathers dust But it��s a flag that I love It��s the only flag I trust He said, ��Son, have you seen the world? Well what would you say, if I said that you could?�� My song hope you enjoyed" Clearly didnt write this... @OP : Cool, a angst filled love song which rhymes. I haven't seen that before/