yanireth said: "Btw, how did you get the Pirate "Transform" sprite ? It's not on bannedstory." i wanna know too D:

Im sorry for the spelling mistakes its not that i cant spell i just type a little quickly and im trying to changing the next part of the history so its not that cliche but is there someone i can add to msn who i can talk to about what to put in and what not?

I like the 4th panel because it is shiny. I like shiny things.

"foudn the lair of the beast" Please double check it or ask other ppl to check it please o.o also, the font is confusing other than that, it looks good.

Dragonzrkool said: "You people have no imagination! A DRAGON ISN'T REAL OR MAPLE RELATED. FOR ALL YOU KNOW IT COULD TAKE 50 YEARS TO KILL ONE! Holy crap... -_-" Will you kill yourself if they have fun?

Whoes. I come in here expecting some queerly cliched comic, I exit this page amazed

lilblizz said: " So the thing that ruined it was it being cliche?" Somewhat. It seems that you haven't put enough effort in to the story. It's the same old, boring story. Use some creativity. Use some imagination. Edit: I'm not saying not to continue with it. Make it better. It's possible. From all your good comics, I think this is a really bad ones.

lilblizz said: " So the thing that ruined it was it being cliche?" You should continue this though. Use that combined dragon/human a lot. And think of something that hasn't been done before. If you can do that, then it'll be one kick ass comic.

ScoobertyDoo said: "Not bad, not bad. One question, though: Do you proof read your work before you post it?" ermmm i do some there were more spelling mistakes than there are now but i didnt see some of the till after i had posted it. also if i wanted to change some of the spellings id have to do most of the panels again since i megred them all in gimp

Not bad, not bad. One question, though: Do you proof read your work before you post it?

Centenial said: "Your comic was really going well, and this one practically killed it. The story couldn't be more lame, or more cliche'd. Use some imagination. Use some creativity. A good fantasy is more than just an oversized lizard and legendary "Heroes" attempting to kill it. The character being the narrator and him telling the story was good, but the story itself screwed it up." So the thing that ruined it was it being cliche?

Your comic was really going well, and this one practically killed it. The story couldn't be more lame, or more cliche'd. Use some imagination. Use some creativity. A good fantasy is more than just an oversized lizard and legendary "Heroes" attempting to kill it. The character being the narrator and him telling the story was good, but the story itself screwed it up.

Btw, how did you get the Pirate "Transform" sprite ? It's not on bannedstory.

You people have no imagination! A DRAGON ISN'T REAL OR MAPLE RELATED. FOR ALL YOU KNOW IT COULD TAKE 50 YEARS TO KILL ONE! Holy crap... -_-

porkky said: "Lol@wyvern. Took me 5 minutes to kill 1 at lvl 70. Not several says. O-o" Well im not basing this comic on maple story events am i im just using some of the characters to tell my story