Rabbit's foot- part 3
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Comments (15)
AffableHero 10/28/08
infiniteIQx said: " Agumon Double Warp (i dono o_o) Divigolve to.... Dark Wargreymon!" Its just Warp Digivolve.
Vuipes 10/28/08
Lol Serge. That's my nickname. Neat-o.
porkky A tip to all dialogue comic makers: ALWAYS use clean and appropriate English. This is a good comic, but the "O" and "Ya's" seem to distract me. - - - - - But I suck at dialogue, hence my comics.
FelixIsaac 10/27/08
Panel 5 is awesome. o.o
hobobob 10/27/08
vyetsu said: "yay feeble position ftw =D" Fetal.
vyetsu 10/27/08
yay feeble position ftw =D
SilverCrow77 10/27/08
nice ! but wasn't it rabbits foot and not tigers paw?
xVedris 10/27/08
Nice editing, RJ. :P The dialogue... is a bit awkward and it doesn't flow very well. Try to imagine yourself in that situation and think of what you'd say in the person's shoes. Of course, it's unrealistic, but hey! It could help a bit. :D
infiniteIQx 10/27/08
heckguy said: " Yeah it's in champion's form now." Agumon Double Warp (i dono o_o) Divigolve to.... Dark Wargreymon!
heckguy 10/27/08
EzraAintDead said: "tigers paw or rabits foot? did it just digivolve?" Yeah it's in champion's form now.
XtremeClax 10/27/08
OK im not trying to flame here ... but how come he remember all of a sudden .... O.o it like "OH I JUST ERMEMBER IM ARCHEALOSGIST MY NAME IS I DO DIS >>> yadaaa ... "
EzraAintDead 10/27/08
tigers paw or rabits foot? did it just digivolve?
lanstrange 10/27/08
Not terrible.. But something about the dialect doesn't have that flowing feel ~_~ I still liked it
Dragonzrkool 10/27/08
Tamwyn said: " You'll always get flames." Never will he get any from me. I actually believe in such thing as a "second chance" =.=
TCRacer 10/27/08
ScoobertyDoo said: " So, wait. You're flaming him due to the fact that he used to be a jerk? I don't think that's very fair =O The comic's pretty good. Not OMGDISizTEHBESTEST, but good. =D Lol at the "setting the mood" part. I thought the same thing that deranged decorative guy did =P" It's the plot that tips of a large percent of the viewers. And here is the formula of how RJ used to function: Step 1) Find a picture. Step 2) Flame it. Step 3) Claim own comic is better. Step 4) Post link to own
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