I like how the story is set out, it looks like it's gonna be good. AND LOL The cell phone thing, my mom says that to me all the time, haha.

Good start o_o I have no idea what's going on in chapter one though o-o....care to explain?

Fallouthomie said: " Let it mellow....if it's brown" Let it drown? =O On Topic: Eh, it's okay I guess. Not "OMGwowz" but it'll do. =D Btw, what's the use of starting a comic if you don't even know where you're going with it yet? o_o

Naota said: "If it's yellow...." Let it mellow....if it's brown

If it's yellow....

Centenial said: "The plot is great. We never had one of those Mystery comics in Basil. (Whoever said Phoenix Wright, I love you so much I'll slap you in the face.) Anyways... Work on the storyline. Put some creativity. Use characterization. :D" Lol, that's what I need help with. =) I'm not too creative, especially since everything isn't 'original' anymore. =.= It's kind of hard starting something that no one's thought of before, you know what I mean? That's why I'm asking you guys if you can thi

Cant wait till its done! =D

Enjoyed :]

DeathPsycho said: "Clay Aiken?" thats what i thought..

The plot is great. We never had one of those Mystery comics in Basil. (Whoever said Phoenix Wright, I love you so much I'll slap you in the face.) Anyways... Work on the storyline. Put some creativity. Use characterization. :D

Nuh uh, put ME in, for i have ... um...a pen >=]

"what the hell is a cellphone for! if you don't use it"

Etokapa said: "So basically the tl;dr version of the bottom is: Give me ideas for a comic because I don't know where it's going?"

not flushing? THAT SON OF A MOTHER AND FATHER

vampires!