Azure chp.1 part 3- the demon slayer

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NinjaSen 10/21/08

Don't worry about that Centenial person, they're just an idiot that go into almost every comic and flame. From what I've seen of their posts, their flames don't even have to make sense, as long as they find something bad to say. You have s decent start here, keep going and good luck ^_^.

Goliath797

sineater31 said: "I don't know what name you were going for but, "Michael" is spelled with an "a" before the "e"" I don't know what argument you were going for but, I believe any name is spelled however the hell they want to be. Edit : haha, i just realized that made my post look really harsh. I meant this in a friendly way, but tried to mimic your post

sineater31 10/20/08

I don't know what name you were going for but, "Michael" is spelled with an "a" before the "e"

Goliath797

Centenial said: "No storyline, no plot, no characterization, no anything. o_o" You know... I wanna see you try better. I want to see YOU try to create a good storyline, plot, and characterize your characters in 3 comics without overdoing it. And try to make it creative AT THE SAME TIME. No one likes a comic that starts out with 12 walls of text. Normally, you start out slow and build speed as you go. Edit : This is a pretty good comic, actually REALLY good if this is one of your first. It just n

AxeVice 10/20/08

Centenial said: "No storyline, no plot, no characterization, no anything. o_o" Well I have to admit, the plot at the moment seems pretty vague, but it should make more sense as the story progresses. @SilverFoxR Thanks for the advice, but since I didn't have photoshop I had to find a way to compress it with gimp .

Centenial 10/20/08

No storyline, no plot, no characterization, no anything. o_o

l3lader 10/20/08

w33bo0 said: "6th panel...HOT DOG! xD" link

SilverCrow77 10/20/08

Etokapa said: "Seems interesting. I wonder why everyone is barefoot." because only demon slayer can have shoes? xD

sorginoth 10/20/08

Oooh the irony =P I like it. Make more please >=) Plus the images are getting better.

Salmondela 10/20/08

Style. Continue.

w33bo0 10/20/08

6th panel...HOT DOG! xD

mobitout 10/20/08

This was good. i liked it =]

Etokapa 10/20/08

Seems interesting. I wonder why everyone is barefoot.

Kyuthemc 10/19/08

It looks like the girl says it. And the line cuts right through her.

D4L0S3R 10/19/08

you cut the girl o_o