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ElvenSoma

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Comments (15)

TopMushroom 08/23/08

middle panels = SNAKEDASH!

fastkillx 08/22/08

put me in this =)

francis1000 08/22/08

take of the "cover", end this series, think of everything and then start it again.

Gemeinhardt 08/21/08

You've improved from the last one. :D There's more expression this time.

MaxxDK 08/21/08

his forehead is bleeding and he's so melancholy

luckygirl300 08/21/08

umm i dont get it?

axeman2669 08/21/08

I just probably dislike story line comics....i mean maybe if the storyline was with something else but with maple characters i cant take anything seriously..i mean look at them how can you make a serious comic with these characters

wakypenguin 08/21/08

ElvenSoma said: "Yeeaaaaaaa I guess I'll stop or keep going depending on the reaction to the next part or so..." keep going ._. u can't just stop making comics just like that... D: i'm looking forward to ur next comic... heeey... now that i think about it... i recognize u... u mailed me twice b4 on wackypenguin asking to be drawn right? ._.

frank123 08/21/08

Rex191 said: " MY GOD....." inorite

ElvenSoma 08/21/08

Yeeaaaaaaa I guess I'll stop or keep going depending on the reaction to the next part or so...

Rex191 08/21/08

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • In the 2nd panel, the bad guy looks like he has a lazy eye. o_o I would move the right eye's pupil to the left. • The fight scene doesn't make sense to me. In the 5th panel, the bad guy's head is on the right side. But then in the next panel he falls down and it's on the left. There's a hole in between the 5th and 6th panel. The bad guy could've been flipped over and smashed into the ground, but we didn't see any of that. The sword flies out of the guy's hand in the

BaBaGaS 08/21/08

ur "chapters" r too short...besides that this is a nice comic :O tho its kinda wierd he suddenly got badass... and the phone call n getting his powers... thats all so sudden o_o kbbnow

xVedris 08/21/08

My Pointers: • In the 2nd panel, the bad guy looks like he has a lazy eye. o_o I would move the right eye's pupil to the left. • The fight scene doesn't make sense to me. In the 5th panel, the bad guy's head is on the right side. But then in the next panel he falls down and it's on the left. There's a hole in between the 5th and 6th panel. The bad guy could've been flipped over and smashed into the ground, but we didn't see any of that. The sword flies out of the guy's hand in the 4th panel, but

Zyinith 08/21/08

Ow, his forehead has a hole in it. :P

DeathPsycho 08/21/08

I lol'd at the last panel. I dont know why though