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Submitted by kawaiipup9
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ponjoe 08/20/08
ah hurrrrrrrrr hurrrrrrrrrrrrr hurrrrrrrrrrrr
xVedris 08/20/08
xGhosts said: " Why the @!#& would you spend SO LONG commenting such a simple comic. She doesn't need help making better comics, she was just showing appreciation for her friend. Jesus Christ, you're making it seem like this is Comic School on Basilmarket. Ugh... I thought the comic was cute, and sad... ):" Actually no, it took like 3 minutes. o_o I understand it was just a simple comic for her friend, but I was just providing some tips and whatnot on how she could improve if she decides to make
Reoss 08/20/08
do you know ray by any chance...
Archninja 08/20/08
xVedris said: "My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather f
Kishou 08/20/08
xVedris said: "My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather f
Archninja
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youbingim 08/20/08
blondinchen said: "wow this was lame..." agreed
kawaiipup9
Thanks to everybody who liked it and said nice things about it =) But O_O I've never made comics before, and like I tried to point out, this comic was just for fun ._. I think what I was trying to show was the good times I've had with Boudreau, so please don't get all technical on me x_X But thanks for the positive criticism xVedris, your last pointer made it alright for you to say everything above it =P I'll keep those pointers in mind if I ever decide to make more comics, which probably won't
Pe0p1e 08/20/08
Hehe made me laugh `
xChaoticOne 08/20/08
xVedris said: "My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather f
CrapSniper 08/20/08
xVedris said: "My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather f
xGhosts
xVedris said: "My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather f
OobieChoobie 08/19/08
Eh its cute. ^^
xVedris 08/19/08
My Pointers: • It'd be funnier if the title was applied to the joke. I like to think of the title and comic to be two different things. The joke in the actual comic doesn't really... get my attention. I mean, yeah, it's pretty funny since the dog pooped near the guy, but where's the zing! ? Where is that thing that really hits home? • In the first panel, why did the guy think "sneak sneak"? Because if I try to sneak on someone, I don't think in my head, "sneak sneak". I'd rather focus on not get
DarkestOne 08/19/08
dam that red dude looks like me >.>
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