lol i like it but this is the first one i've read so idk how it falls in relation to other two i agree with most of the guys long list of pointers but magicall floating? no its liek a backstep turned but the missing outline makes it hard to see, also the same scene, its like "OMGOSH, I mean..." like when someone is stalking someone ready to strike and then someone liek their little brother comes up and goes "Hi Chico!" its liek a mini heart attack, i beleive thats what that panel was, may have b

Er.. it's ok >-> but just a hint. If you're going to use Comic Life, stick to chat bubbles along the lines of emotions or sound. Like normal bubble for talking, dotted line for whispering (cause it's only "half" there so it's like a lower tone. Just keep that in mind.

Lol, so the person trying to avenge his family now changed to that fugly look? f3

khoa110 said: "what kind of pirate wears a yellow shirt with a octopus on it and blue jeans" A person that won a contest.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • In panel 8, why does the black dude say "I mean...". Unless the captain can read minds, there's no point in putting that there. He has nothing to explain for, seeing how he THOUGHT "...he's...not here?", instead of saying it out loud." I think he's saying "I mean..." because he shouted some kind of profanity.

This so dis coordinated, I lost my phone just reading it. So in the past 3 issues, they seem like the first one. We have Pirates part three where he kills the captain. You might as well should have just skipped the first 2 issues because it made the same sense as starting there. Since the previous story line wasn't really connected to it. We have Pirates part four where they attack a town, but the text on the top basically summarizes the past 4 so this could be the first one as well! Then we hav

Looks like you had fun with Comic Life.

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Title that seems like a scary gjoul or slimy creature does not fit for a pirates series. Just keep the old title you had. :D That was good. • It's weird how their feet seem to be inside the group for me. MapleStory is a 2-D game, so that wouldn't really work. Just try to keep it on the top of the tile. • There's A LOT of unnecessary kinds of chat bubbles. Just still with one when they're talking. You could use a zig-zagged one if it's an exclaimation, but I swear, t

Holy comic format Batman! anywho, xVedris pretty much said everything..praise the critic

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Title that seems like a scary gjoul or slimy creature does not fit for a pirates series. Just keep the old title you had. :D That was good. • It's weird how their feet seem to be inside the group for me. MapleStory is a 2-D game, so that wouldn't really work. Just try to keep it on the top of the tile. • There's A LOT of unnecessary kinds of chat bubbles. Just still with one when they're talking. You could use a zig-zagged one if it's an exclaimation, but I swear, t

lol awesome! only thing....yeah.........if u have a plan u shud get all ppl on the plan to do something....not 1 guy o.o

xVedris said: "My Pointers: • Title that seems like a scary gjoul or slimy creature does not fit for a pirates series. Just keep the old title you had. :D That was good. • It's weird how their feet seem to be inside the group for me. MapleStory is a 2-D game, so that wouldn't really work. Just try to keep it on the top of the tile. • There's A LOT of unnecessary kinds of chat bubbles. Just still with one when they're talking. You could use a zig-zagged one if it's an exclaimation, but I swear, t

Red and grey is a pretty good combo.

My Pointers: • Title that seems like a scary gjoul or slimy creature does not fit for a pirates series. Just keep the old title you had. :D That was good. • It's weird how their feet seem to be inside the group for me. MapleStory is a 2-D game, so that wouldn't really work. Just try to keep it on the top of the tile. • There's A LOT of unnecessary kinds of chat bubbles. Just still with one when they're talking. You could use a zig-zagged one if it's an exclaimation, but I swear, there are like 5

lol.. atleast he had a reason to kill him :P