9991111334 said: "i don't understand. when i saw the title i though Eroti... story lol " ME2!

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ChaosHero95 said: " nope 2 so far -.-"" They're just being nice.

cowcatcher13 said: "Only one person liked it.................." nope 2 so far -.-"

Only one person liked it..................

gentleman's dash!

HE KILLED THE PUPPY! </3

AznAks said: "What the hell is going on? Was the dog talking? Why's the 3rd panel all negative? Why is he talking to a dog? Who is the dog? Where did he come from? Does he normally talk to himself so much?" Ok.. I think Heratic had a fight with someone. The dog looks like he's like... tranfering his thoughts to Heratic, so ya.. he was kinda talking. I'm not sure why it's all negative. The dog is his friend. The dog is X. lol o-o. From his mom. He's not talking to himself.

I see that you've worked a while on this, but i still can't seem to follow the plot. The things I can get out of this chapter are: The dog is X X has a necklace that is worth something The guy just killed X I say that maybe you should work on having more panels, but they fit together great! I hope that the next chapter will explain everything.

That guy in the last panel... He looks like WolfXlord!

heretic, not heratic for one. 2nd, the editting looks, well... bad. -_- the plot is hard to understand so far...

What necklace?

AznAks said: "What the hell is going on? Was the dog talking? Why's the 3rd panel all negative? Why is he talking to a dog? Who is the dog? Where did he come from? Does he normally talk to himself so much?" that's exactly what i was thinking! :O

My Pointers: • Look at my post on your first one. o_o • Check your punctuation. "It's okay X theres no one around." should be "It's okay , X , there ' s no one around. • I don't understand this one. Why did the guy go "We just have to... just X!"? I guess I'll learn more later.

i don't understand. when i saw the title i though Eroti... story lol