xXxTrxXx said: "You finally discovered Banned Story. Please take the time to practice it before you go off creating random skill layers that you think are cool. They're not. There has been too many crap comics with flashy skills like this. Please, get your plotline writing skills worked on first, then come back to basil with a better comic" Atleast he took the time to make a comic how about you try and lets see how yours turns out

You finally discovered Banned Story. Please take the time to practice it before you go off creating random skill layers that you think are cool. They're not. There has been too many crap comics with flashy skills like this. Please, get your plotline writing skills worked on first, then come back to basil with a better comic

It's "Heretic".

RightJustice said: "Your editing is worse that Crandalmeade. Even that guy has got good at it now though....." Dude,stop being an effing ahole in every single thread. Instead of making him feel worse and depressed, give him some tips. Flaming won't change anything.

Your editing is worse that Crandalmeade. Even that guy has got good at it now though.....

Jayzee994 said: "The last 3 panels confused me." last 5 panels for me O_o

My Pointers: • Since the guy only talked in two panels, it's hard to tell, but: Check your capitalization and punctuation here and there. The tiniest details are the most important, unless, like, the entire thing is really crappy. • The banner has really bad quality. Did you resize it with MS Paint? o_o A good tip is to never resize things with MS Paint. Always resize in Paint.NET, Gimp, or Photoshop. Also, this is just my preference, but I think you should make the banner go all the way to one

The last 3 panels confused me.

MerchantJuju said: "Main guy only got to say 3 sentence and the rest of the panel is some kind of confusing battle... Im confused @_@" Join the club. ><

lame

NoRacism said: "This is crandelmeade quality." i love how hes now an adjective

This is crandelmeade quality.

Main guy only got to say 3 sentence and the rest of the panel is some kind of confusing battle... Im confused @_@

TehJerk said: "In the fourth panel, it looks like he's deflecting the attack by farting." LOL QFT!

Bannedstory skill comic. Epic fail.