It Pains Me. About Her
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thread starter DarkFocus Sep 15 2010
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| v-Poem below-v (So everyone knows what is coming) It pains me. It pains me to think, or to even talk about what could have been caused by me. A life ruined because I was too scared to say a few words, whether they�d be of affection, words of compliments, or words of insignificance. No longer can I see the face of this slut, and smile with a drink for her in one hand, and a drink for myself in the other. No longer can I give her a peck on the cheek without needing to shower when I get home. No longer can I look into the face of the girl with a bright future, and know that when she left school, she would do her homework, and carefully, and accidentally construct the bright future that could only belong to her. When I look into her cold, worn eyes now. I can no longer see the girl who used to push away pervy hands, and rarely ever, let boyfriends peck her on the cheek. I can no longer see the girl, who I wished, would grab my hand with delight, who I wished, would embrace me, as I could do for her; who I wished would tell me �I love you� like I wish I had the courage to say to her. Her eyes no longer show happiness. Her eyes no longer show innocence. Her eyes no longer show grace and perfection. They only show disobedience and pain. Pain of having a boyfriend who cares for one thing. Pain of having a boyfriend who forces her to treat his friends, the way she treats him. Pain of knowing she should be on a pedestal in heaven, not on the ground on her knees. Thinking of Her Thinking of him Thinking of Myself Thinking of them It pains me. It really does. Thanks for reading. EDIT: What this poem is about (the gist of it) is at the bottom of the first page. No, it's not the whole story with full descriptions of everything that happened. It's just the basic...principal behind this. |
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IIIlllIII 09/15/10
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| what the hell are you talking about? |
PyritsNoSwiping 09/15/10
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cheesie 09/15/10
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lumster45
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 | So you found this somewhere on the internet, thought it was cool, copied it, and posted it on basil hoping people would think you are some poet? Nice try. |
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lordxuefeng 09/15/10
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| what are you talking about? |
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aaronthecow 09/15/10
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| [quote] lordxuefeng : what are you talking about? [/quote] I'm thinking his slutty girlfriend cheated on him |
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FlashJab 09/15/10
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| Imma have to agree with lumster :/ |
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Sirenheart 09/15/10
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| [quote] lumster45 : So you found this somewhere on the internet, thought it was cool, copied it, and posted it on basil hoping people would think you are some poet? Nice try. [/quote] he probably didn't, don't be so judging and you're all dumb if you can't even figure out what this is about. |
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ho1yxxcleric 09/15/10
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| If you wrote this poem, this is very good. I mean like REALLY GOOD. I enjoyed reading this. |
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DarkFocus 09/15/10
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| [quote] lumster45 : So you found this somewhere on the internet, thought it was cool, copied it, and posted it on basil hoping people would think you are some poet? Nice try. [/quote] actually no. I was writing out of depression (of a girl of course) and decided I wanted to know what basil thought. I wanted some feedback whether it's "lolwat" or "what the hell are you talking about" I can tell you that I have the only copy of this ANYWHERE as an untitled document in Microsoft Works Word Processor right now; however it isn't exactly proof that this is original. So instead of fighting with you over it, I'll challenge you. Find this ANYWHERE on the internet and post a link with where you found it. I'm not a poet, however I do like to write. http://www.basilmarket.com/forum/1671281/3 Exalted is mine, if you'd like to tell me I copied that too from somewhere. |
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RageQuitHero 09/15/10
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| mmm thats some good copypasta |
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WowIsUSerz 09/15/10
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| After I read this it inspired me. To say: Wut? |
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DarkFocus 09/15/10
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| everyone not randomly judging that it's copied and pasted. Thanks. @aaronthecow It's actually about a girl I used to really like (an old crush). I met up with her yesterday, and how slutty she became really depressed me. I've been thinking about her all yesterday and today, and every time I think about how I could have changed her life maybe with a few compliments, or words of inspiration she wouldn't be...as "slutty" as she is now. I kind of blame myself for the way she is now, and when I think about it, it brings tears to my eyes. I feel like a pansy =/ |
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monkey3842 09/15/10
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| You should be a poet haha. you are really good. nice poem. and sorry about whatever is going on right now in your life. |
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