Maple:The Day it Ends Chapter 15 to End.
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thread starter areodon Sep 11 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
HEY! Read this first! Welcome to Chapter fifteen, sixteen and the last seventeenth!, if you have not read either chapter one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen or fourteen! Please return to. *Note* Ch14 will have 1~13. (Chapter 1~12 are locked by mods. Can read, cannot post.) Chapter 10 & 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 -Be courteous, be nice. -Enjoy your read. -Hello, this is Cohner. I�ve been suspended from Basil for the act of making an attempt to create a new account. A 40-Day suspension will be long enough for me to leave Basil. -After I am done, delete FatalWeek, but please, don�t delete Areodon, deleting this... would sadden me. CHAPTER FIFTEEN: Act of Doing, Act of Evil I sat in my private quarters with Mychell giving me a back massage while she asked me why I was still so stiff. I told her that if I died in Scania, everything will be in vain... I can�t allow myself to die, well, without purpose. I sat upright now, rotating my shoulders in a clockwise motion. Then stretching out my left arm as though, it was the only one I had left. I took a deep sigh, kissed Mychell on the cheek and told her, what ever happens after I die, live a happy life. She let one tear slide down her face as though she knew, I was going to die soon, we all did. �Transmission report private?� I said to one of the control room workers. �We are getting signal from Zero sir!� He replied. �Good...� I said. The holographic projector came up as I sat down, checking all the damage we received on the front part of our ship. I pressed a button to open another one with a profile on Nightmare, a 01-X member. I put that down as the static on the transmitter picked up Zero. �Hello, Cohner. I�ve been needing to talk to you for quite some time now. I have a proposal for you and Scania, hell, all of the world�s future.� he said to me as he grinned. I chuckled a tad, then looked at him and said, �Zero, Zero, Zero... I have chosen my fate, you have yours, making a proposal... we both know it won�t work. Now, let me hear it, just so we can agree that it both won�t work. Agreed?� As I ended he laughed a bit too, but to only be back to telling of his plan. �Cohner, we both know, you and me, are the greatest two powers this existence has ever seen. You know so. Now, listen. I want you, to surrender your position as General of Scania, and I will save you, and your world. Just allow me, to have all but Scania and one world of your choice to save. I believe you would do such a thing, since... we all know, you�re a raging entity of 01-X, you have it in you. This stress, this anxiety, this fear and this anger can leave you forever. You and Mychell can settle down, forget this happened, have a normal life, so can all of Scania. What do you say?� I sat in silence, thinking about this. It was a chance to end this miserable train ride I started years ago, ever since my dad... I yelled in my head saying no, no, no, no! I cannot just allow this world
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ZeroKnightz 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Brb reading now.
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areodon 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thank you Andy. It's long, yet it's the end.
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ankitbigguy 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Brb Sleeping Bag gonna be HERE alll night And day
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areodon 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] ankitbigguy : Brb Sleeping Bag gonna be HERE alll night And day [/quote] The 25 Days of working hard and being busy changed the audience. Before... I was known and people loved my work. Yet, I don't know anymore.
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pkmnking 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Nice
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areodon 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thanks, also, I want to say thanks to the people who kept me going on this 17 Chapter Project. Everyone who asked for a part, all the mail, all the praise and criticism. Thank you. I wish to see Basil like I have through my work.
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mylordoz 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
nice gj man
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meep1998 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
some one needs to animate this Xp
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areodon + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
mylordoz Thanks. Within the next week, my AP Literature project this will be. But ofc. Some names need to be changed, yet. I have a feeling it's going to be the same either way meep1998 I've been trying for weeks.
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PraisedAura 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
back. Eh my repost for you failed, but the story was amazing
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areodon 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] PraisedAura : back. Eh my repost for you failed, but the story was amazing [/quote] Andy, you tried. Yet, you have to know when to post.
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persephone99 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
That is so sweet and sad... I swear I'm bookmarking this so that I can read it forever! RIP: Cohner, one of the best characters to come onto Basil and thrill us with his stories...
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infferrno 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I still say the descriptions are lacking. :/ It... just seems short for a novel or novella.
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blahsand724 09/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] meep1998 : some one needs to animate this Xp [/quote] YES! YES! PLEASE! that would be sooo sick
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