Rate and Criticize please

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thread starter AvengerKun Sep 02 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

http://i53.tinypic.com/1zqa73o.jpg Done by hand Picture of.. @CityInColor @xRawrx3 No scanner so I had to take a pic and upload it so please excuse the bad quality

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CityInColor 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Har Har! I love it!

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kingofusa 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It could use some more detail but I like the composition.

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sarangbi 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's good haha. Lmao I just drew a pic today, but i'm so rusty. It's pretty horrible

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flipthenoob 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

anatomy, specially the one on the right; hand too small keep it up though, looks good so far

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iNubsicle 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Not a bad start; however, the female's pose in the picture looks awkward and stiff. Also, pay attention to their hands as they are not proportioned correctly.

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Underfree 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Make the girl's boobs bigger. I assume this is the first page of a very sexual flip-page book.

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IHateJuice 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

lol thanks for the laugh. 0/10. No seriously, it's not good at all. No shading, and people don't look right lol.

AvengerKun 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Haha I'm not too used to drawing girls cuz I would always draw guys when I was younger :/ Tryna fix that a bit now Hands aren't exactly my forte. In fact I despise them so that's probably where i need the most work Thanks for the criticism though :D

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KewlEH 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

a greater knowledge of anatomy would probably help you.

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xRawrx3 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

AWESOME-NESS! :D i like it haha (:

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Xchippzanuff 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

that is sexy D:

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SupaSteezy 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

That is awesome!

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NineRulaz 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

so if i can assume 80% of basil cant draw, average stuff like this gets attention? Interesting.

godIhateyou 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Girls fist is too small. Legs are not proportionate and they meet WAY to low. boobs are too small. fix the fingers on the girls other hand. The guy looks okay though, except the arm with the knives looks like it's facing the other direction.