My first actual "good" drawing. Rate please? (:

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thread starter ilyToaster Sep 02 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

http://i51.tinypic.com/vdek2s.jpg I know it's not great. :d It was rushed because I need to shower. :d

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EtherXFayt 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Aww! <3 Haha, I feel really special =]

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ilyToaster 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] EtherXFayt : Aww! <3 Haha, I feel really special =] [/quote] I even wrote a little note on my paper in the picture :D

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EtherXFayt 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

ilyToaster OMG <3 Awww=D 10/10 Awesome picture Awesome artist :D

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hahalosers 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

No offence but his face shape annoys me but besides that nice picture

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ilyToaster 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Yes, I know my drawings are terrible. :d Any constructive criticism though? =x

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EtherXFayt 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] hahalosers : No offence but his face shape annoys me but besides that nice picture [/quote] Personally I like my face. How dare you say my face has a weird shape! Your...your nose is too..invisible!

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hahalosers + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] ilyToaster : Yes, I know my drawings are terrible. :d Any constructive criticism though? =x [/quote] Make his face umm a little bigger :P EtherXFayt well well you look like a maple avatar >:|

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CygnusSalad 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

The girl or guy in the front's neck is too long. Try to draw new eyes. Mouth is too small.

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SomeGuyXXX 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You broke my neck. Thanks.

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inMyBeep 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's quite nice (: Criticism? Hm. She looks standing and the desk seems to be lifted up, well I can never draw anything other than faces and bodies so that must've been awkward. Hands.. Where are they. He seems to b e flying, I like it. My head hurts do to sidelooking. Overall, cute and I LOVE that message. (;

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Phylar + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Looks pretty decent. Try sketching out the proportions before you start filling in the details though. Like, if you look at the head of the girl, it's cut off like a D at the top instead of being a full oval. It looks like you did it on purpose to go for the chibi effect, but you made the bodies more realistic so it doesn't fit. You should choose to either chibify the entire drawing or make the whole drawing realistic. Try to shade the hair in in the direction the hair goes. The girl's hair looks a bit off because you used straight lines going down. xD Last major thing is the proportion of the desk. The way you drew it, the back is a bit bigger than the front. Things in the distance are supposed to get a bit smaller so the back should be a bit smaller than the front. Might also want to point the pencil/eraser in a different direction from the desk, otherwise it makes the desk look completely 2d and that the pencil/eraser are dropping off. So basically just fix up some proportions and shade things the direction they should go in(like the hair) and you're set. C: The rest is mostly just anatomy stuff, but that takes forever to learn.

ilyToaster + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Yea my camera always flips it. The guy is kneeling xD I failed that part. Well I can't really draw after the face, so that was just a train wreck. Above ...wow I was just rushing this. Haha. Well I will have to keep that in mind next time. :d & while I was drawing, I kind of gave up on erasing anymore so I just kept going. xD

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EtherXFayt 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] ilyToaster : Yea my camera always flips it. The guy is kneeling xD I failed that part. Well I can't really draw after the face, so that was just a train wreck. Above ...wow I was just rushing this. Haha. Well I will have to keep that in mind next time. :d & while I was drawing, I kind of gave up on erasing anymore so I just kept going. xD [/quote] Hehe, P.S. I told you =]

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ilyToaster 09/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] EtherXFayt : Hehe, P.S. I told you =] [/quote] You didn't tell me anything? What?

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