Does this poem makes me a freak?

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thread starter Xchippzanuff Aug 20 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Useless, Hated, Name me. I hate every damn person. Just buzz off! I don't want to see no one who brings my negative side, who cares, I hate this, Never will pass because people say I'm a retarded teenage boy who will never graduate. They bring me down; every dam person is out there to ruin me. Just keep breaking my soul down so I can see just white in my world. I quit! My life is over with everyone. I rather just die and never been born. No one knows my nature, no one shall! No one will care for me, no one shall. Name me, Feed me, Stab me, free me. I'm a curse, I am a ghost, I am Ivan, the seventeen-year-old kid with a dead heart. The only one who understand me more than anyone, unless there's someone who know my past. My eyes are white, my voice is black, and my face is blue. I'm dead, dead since fourteen, who is my family? Who is my love? Who is my future? No they don't exist anymore. Why? I gave up my past for a meaningless future. I'm dead, alone to die slowly in my hell pit room. My anger is blood hungry; my sorrow is breaking, my depression is happy, since my joy is silence. My heart is blue, Strike it! So red will be reborn. Strike me! So I can regain my colors. Forgive me, I'm just hopeless but so are you. You keep putting me down so can avoid my future. Kill my past, erase my present, and carry my future. Destroy my negative side, revive my positive one more. Avenge me. I am hopeless but I love it, so I can understand that there is someone who really know my life, please don�t ever repeat my mistake in this poem. Forgive me for breaking the rules but I want you to understand that I'm a hopeless star who is seeking for the right people to help me from my chains and lead me to the future were we all belong. Remember who you are and remember who i am. We will fix this darken world. Together. We are never alone in the start of a bright future. i wrote this during my dark time

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ClementZ 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

1. Not a poem. It doesn't make you a freak, but this is dark.

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Xchippzanuff 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] ClementZ : 1. Not a poem. It doesn't make you a freak, but this is dark. [/quote] well i got like differnt things from it, like a song, poem, story, but yea that's my emotions on a piece of paper

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UglierBetty 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Bravo! I cried.

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Doro 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Emo phase, it's common for people around your age. No, it does not make you a freak.

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ToeSheBah 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This is the epital of fine poetry. Well done!

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FreshBread 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

poems are for little girls and rabbits

hiim 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Is this you? I'm sure you're just overexagerating your emotions and problems

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Xchippzanuff 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] hiim : Is this you? I'm sure you're just overexagerating your emotions and problems [/quote] no is not, this was writen a year ago and stored away

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Holycross122 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

hiim LOL @OT no it doesn't make me freak, it just makes me think your emo and I don't really like this poem, not for the fact that it is dark but because it's not the kind of poetry that I like, I kind of thought this was like from a teenage boy's diary when I was reading it. (lol diary)

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Fabregas 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You sir, are a freak!

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vcxsinal 08/20/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Sounds like something awful happened between your years 14-17

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