Omega Sector: The Legacy (Fan-fiction Series) *Chapter 3*

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thread starter striker1333 Aug 19 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Hello all :D. After being inspired by Fatalweek's "The Day it Ends" series, I've decided to try to make something of the same caliber. Please note that it's NOT the same thing, it's an entirely different concept and series. Hope you like it! If you haven't read the previous chapters, it is highly recommended you do so to get the feel of the story. Links to the previous chapters are listed below. Notes! This is my work. Not anyone else. This is all fiction, hence Fan-Fiction. This is NOT a prediction of what's going to happen during any events in Maple. I'm taking requests for people to be in it. Message me your IN-GAME name, your class, and your level. NOTES: Due to the unexpected length that Chapter 3 was going to be, I've decided to cut it in half. The other half of chapter 3 will now be chapter 4. All the other chapters will be pushed back one. Parts/People I need I need volunteer names for the following parts: Please check the following page for available positions in the story. Please also post your requests there, as it'll be easier for me to keep track of it. Thanks again! Omega Sector: The Legacy Character Request Page Previous Chapters Chapter 1: The Warning Chapter 2: The Travel Chapter Three: The Journey The trip back to Base was fairly uneventful. Besides a few run-ins with a group of Bernard Grays (which scattered the moment we got sight of them), and being �ambushed� by a group of Mateons (who thought that little lasers would turn the Extortion into mush), we reached base without incident or catastrophe. Once the ship docked at port, I got up from my seat when Puct approached me. �Commander, what will you have us do? The general said that we are to leave immediately once we reached port, no?� I thought there for a moment. �I�ll give you all a day to gather your belongings and say your goodbyes to your friends and family. I have a feeling we won�t be returning back to base for a while, a week at minimum. You are all dismissed from duty. Inform the rest of the crew of this. We leave in twenty-four hours.� �Yes, sir.� I exited the bridge, and then made my way to the ship exit, where I was approached by Ganian this time. �Sir, shall I accompany you to see General Maestro?� he said, with a longing look on his face. He was always one to be enthusiastic about his work on the Extortion, and was rising through the ranks quickly. Soon enough, HE could be the captain of an airship. However, at this time, he needed to know his place. I sighed. �If I wanted anyone to accompany me, Ganian, it would be Puct. He is the 2nd-in-command, remember?� I sighed once more. �Go and see your family and fianc�e, Ganian. We won�t be returning to base for a while. You�re dismissed for the time being. We leave port in twenty-four hours. With or without you, Ganian.� �Sir, yes sir!� he said, dashing off to his quarters. Finally free of all interruptions, I made my way down the ship exit to the dock zone. There greeting me were Major Xobile, my father, and man I d

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lollerdude98 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I think Ellenia is supposed to be spelt "Ellinia", but otherwise, good job!

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striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] lollerdude98 : I think Ellenia is supposed to be spelt "Ellinia", but otherwise, good job! [/quote] Woops, never noticed that :P

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Zolasa + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Good read. I'm liking it so far, Keep it up dude. Also on a side note, There must have been a subliminal message about ramen in there somewhere. Cause i got a hankering for some now....

striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] Zolasa : Good read. I'm liking it so far, Keep it up dude. Also on a side note, There must have been a subliminal message about ramen in there somewhere. Cause i got a hankering for some now.... [/quote] Maybe the Black Mage mind-controlled some ramen? o.O Who knows :P

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daraginsinx 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] striker1333 : Maybe the Black Mage mind-controlled some ramen? o.O Who knows :P [/quote] But that would make it evil ramen =O side note,when is Tom coming in?

kuradogaru + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

my post supporting this story....its getting better every chapter i read.....so im wating for chapter 4 which is released next week, right? Anyways... good job! P.S: Read my comment on your "Volunteer names" page, its on page 7......

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striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] daraginsinx : But that would make it evil ramen =O side note,when is Tom coming in? [/quote] Tom will be coming in soon. I've reassigned him a different role. You'll see him soon :D

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persephone99 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

now to wait for the next chapter... although why ramen and not pho? pho tastes just as good. (or better, since i've never had ramen)

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striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] persephone99 : now to wait for the next chapter... although why ramen and not pho? pho tastes just as good. (or better, since i've never had ramen) [/quote] I was thinking that too :P Since I'm vietnamese, I knew pho would be an option. I just thought that more people would know about ramen, and ramen fit a little better than pho.

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icalvin123 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Wow that's good keep up the good work man this story deserves alot more reads And comments

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striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] icalvin123 : Wow that's good keep up the good work man this story deserves alot more reads And comments [/quote] Thank you! That certainly means a lot to me :D

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SSBBLucas 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I loved how you incorporated all the classes in. And the action is REALLY REALLY (note the caps) nice. (I read chap.1 :D)

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striker1333 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] SSBBLucas : I loved how you incorporated all the classes in. And the action is REALLY REALLY (note the caps) nice. (I read chap.1 :D) [/quote] Thank you :D I plan to try and fit every single bit of Maple World I can into my series. :D

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SSBBLucas 08/19/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

x3 GOOD luck :D I hope all goes well.

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