Omega Sector: The Legacy (Fan-fiction Series) *Chapter 1*
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thread starter striker1333 Aug 17 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Hello all :D. After being inspired by Fatalweek's "The Day it Ends" series, I've decided to try to make something of the same caliber. Please note that it's NOT the same thing, it's an entirely different concept and series. Hope you like it! Notes! This is my work. Not anyone else. This is all fiction, hence Fan-Fiction. This is NOT a prediction of what's going to happen during any events in Maple. I'm taking requests for people to be in it. Message me your IN-GAME name, your class, and your level. The first attempt at this thread died about two hours ago, that's why I'm re-posting it (If you're asking). Other Chapters Chapter 2: The Travel Chapter 3: The Journey Parts/People I need I need volunteer names for the following parts: Please check the following page for available positions in the story. Please also post your requests there, as it'll be easier for me to keep track of it. Thanks again! Omega Sector: The Legacy Character Request Page Introduction/Prologue This series is set 3 years from now. It's based on the view, actions, and life of Commander Matt Maestro, the son of General Maestro of Omega Sector, and this novel starts off of on the Omega Sector Frigate Extortion, commandeered by Matt. Chapter One: The Warning It all really just started with a bang. Several bangs to be exact. �Commander! Wake up, Commander!�, I heard from outside my quarters in on the Extortion, waking me from the four actual peaceful hours of sleep I managed to get. I simply just tried to drown out the sound of fist against steel door by wrapping my pillow around my ears, knowing full well it was my energetic fourth-in-command, 2nd Class Lieutenant Fred Ganian. The banging continued for what seemed like eternity (while in reality, it was five seconds). �What the hell is it, Ganian?� I shrieked, as I couldn�t bear that sound any longer. Bolting from the bed, I stormed to the door, yanking it open to see my subordinate�s fist roaring towards my face, who realized at the last second that the door was no longer present and in its place was his red-faced commander. �Message from Admiral Kyrin, Commander! She�s on Telecom and says she needs to talk to you right away! She says it�s urgent!� He said, bringing his hand up to his head in salute. He then blinked and glanced away. �Uh, sir, you might want to put something on before you go up to the Bridge.� Realizing at that moment I was wearing nothing but a pair of red boxers with Bloctopuses on them, I hollered, �Get back to the bridge, Ganian! NOW!�, giving him the most angry look I could possibly bring up at the moment. �S-sir! Yes, sir!� sputtered Ganian, as he dashed back to the bridge, leaving me to my red boxers and my equally red face. I shut the door, turned on the lights, and sat down at my desk, putting my head in my hands. Today was the complete mimic of what happened eight months ago, when disaster struck Ossyria. A disaster of time that still stuck in my mind. Realizing that this isn�t the time for mulling over
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lollerdude98 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I love it! I'll volunteer for the scout leader position. Make up any name you want for me.
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FatalWeek 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Put To be Continued into the Header. Don't ever use caps unless it's an initial like ASAP. If someone is yelling, you just add "!". I got lost on some if the dialog. But, since I know your POV, I still understand it.
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striker1333 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thanks! I'm working on the second chapter right now.
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iwinagain 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
i like it :D i'd like to volunteer as comminications officer and put me as michael
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parsapwner1 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Can you make me the dock commander? Any name but if i had to pick, i'd be !xobile
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OMGImHerGL 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Lemme be in it
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LilguysShop 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
LilguysShopPretty nice, I say you must become a actual writer.
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phantur 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
So far one of the only fan fics I have respect for on this site. I recommend signing up for fanfiction.net and submitting your work there. They give very good tips on how to improve.
cool123ter + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
nvm didnt read top part. man gl.
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daraginsinx 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Very good sir,nice start. Can I be Envoy Leader plaese? I would like to be called Tom or anything else you can think of
striker1333 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thanks you guys! I'll be posting the second chapter later on soon. :D
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lollerdude98 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
^ soon, plz. This is really good.
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striker1333 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Thanks, guys. Remember, I still need people for the parts before I can release the second chapter.
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IVIoogle 08/17/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
IVIoogleIts not very long... Try making the chapters a little longer.
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