Maple:The Day it Ends Chapter 3.
thread starter FatalWeek Aug 01 2010
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| HEY! Read this first! Welcome to Chapter three, if you have not read either chapter one or two, please return to. Chapter Two Chapter One -Be courteous, be nice. -Enjoy your read. CHAPTER THREE: Inception of War As I awoke from my quarters, I awaited orders from the General. I kept thinking about this "Maria" girl; I had to find out more about her. As I walked through my door and down the hall, I pondered on what questions I should interrogate Maria with. I needed to know everything about her. "Hey Maria, can I ask you a few questions?" "Sure, Colonel, like what?" "The General doesn't think you're a Windian..." I said, with a calm tone. "What? The General doesn't think that the Windian's Sergeant is a Windian? I should kill you both." "Hold it, I never said I doubted you. I have to make sure that you are, in fact, a Windian." We sat in her quarters for hours on end, talking about Windian propaganda. She answered all the questions correctly, and there were some things I didn't even know until I was told. As soon as we went through the one hundred twenty-five questions, I told her that she passed. Surprisingly, she didn't want me to leave. It seemed that I was the only person left for her. We stayed until it was around lunch hour, and then we went to the dining hall to get some food. "You know, Cohner, I knew you never doubted that I was a Windian." "I guess you were right. After this, I have to go speak to the General. I have a new mission." "Well, I'll assume that it's important." "Colonel Cohner! Come quickly!" exclaimed Brigadier General David. "It's time?" I said, disappointed. "Maria, I'll be back." "I'm guessing you're ready to set afoot in Bera, Colonel." David said, with a smirk. "Ready whenever you are, old buddy." As we got to the ship to send aid to Bera, we didn't know what to expect. I was assigned to a new division, 32-K, which meant new people. Even worse, new problems. - Start Log 81 - I am not ready for this mission. But I have to do it, General's orders. The General is still not attacking Broa, due to the lack of real evidence. As for Maria, she's a lovely girl. She's someone I can unwind to, like Andrew, but I can't tell her too much. She's a Windian; she could still ruin this for us all... - End Log 81 - "Cohner, can you lead us in to Bera?" someone blared in my headset. "I thought you were to lead our group! Obviously, you can't do that!" "Shut up, Jason. Sorry bro, Jason is a bit hot-headed. I'm Alex." "Seems like we're having group problems, Alex." I said, in a humorous tone. "Just send us through the gate to Bera and we�ll be alright." Alex said. As our Beran reinforcement team came to the gate, we were about to see something that we definitely didn't want to see. A world war. I'll say, I was scared out of my mind. I've never been this close to battle. As we got through the gate, our vision became real. A full-out war raging on between Bera and Broa. "My God, Maria was right." I said. "Who the hell is Maria? Your girlfriend |
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gameravenged 08/01/10
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| Next thing you know, a good guy ends up being a spy for the bad guys. |
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FatalWeek 08/01/10
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| [quote] gameravenged : Next thing you know, a good guy ends up being a spy for the bad guys. [/quote] Derp. Don't tell me how to write my story >: |
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Jeanie092398 08/01/10
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| [quote] FatalWeek : That makes no sense! [/quote] But I want a part, could you make me a part? D: |
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FatalWeek 08/01/10
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| [quote] Jeanie092398 : But I want a part, could you make me a part? D: [/quote] PM me like everyone else. That kind of stuff is for that. |
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Jeanie092398 08/01/10
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| [quote] FatalWeek : PM me like everyone else. That kind of stuff is for that. [/quote] O.o' Kay O.O |
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FatalWeek 08/01/10
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| Thank you for understanding :F |
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gameravenged 08/01/10
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| lmao i know your writing the story im just imagining what might happen. Cant blame a guy for having Imagination f3 |
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icalvin123 08/01/10
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| [quote] iDieSoon : You should give Broa some reinforcements. They seem awfully weak with Bera and Scania against them, Windia must have destoryed some armies. And please don't make Khaini the bad guys. D: [/quote] we have bf police and d/c hackers no one can beat us |
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FatalWeek 08/01/10
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| Gameravengod I understand. But stop acting like you know what will happen! Because I do a lot of twists! iCalvin The BF police died after a nuke went off in Broa. |
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gt6player 08/01/10
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| I just hope I don't die when I get put in :] Hmm, do you plan to release 2 chaps a day? |
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gameravenged 08/01/10
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| i didnt say i know thatd happend >:O i said im imagining god dang it sad face :[ |
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FatalWeek 08/01/10
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| [quote] gt6player : I just hope I don't die when I get put in :] Hmm, do you plan to release 2 chaps a day? [/quote] The possibility of that is low, the 2nd one yesterday was a test. I need to know when to post. |
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gameravenged 08/01/10
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| So how do you plan on doing that? like a chapter a day? or like once every x days? |
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icalvin123 08/01/10
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| xD this story is starting to sound like world war 1. but then here has to be a 2 nooooooooooooooooo bf police got wiped? Broa has no defences! I suspect foul play involved |
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lollerdude98 08/01/10
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| Do the soldiers fight with real Maple skills? Like Big Bang, Hurricane, B-step etc. |
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