Cool rollback poem :)

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thread starter VietDreamer Jul 23 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I just found this really cool poem on the nexon forum. It's kinda funny. http://forum.nexon.net/iTCG/forums/5211546/ShowThread.aspx --------- Roses are red and Violets are blue I got rolled back, how about you? These digressions are stumping and hard to take. Truly it is difficult to find that i go from 35 to 25 every time i wake. Nexon doesnt really care and sports a laugh Their lies will make their necks grow like giraffes. For every time they lie longer does their neck grow Eventually their neck will become a nesting ground for crows double drop and exp will never fix this we should strike and make them homeless Their hearts are black like a balrog and cold as a lycanthrope Dont be surprised if their head end up like smash cantelopes. Im out im done for i have no more time But the next time there is a roll back be sure to expect another witty rhyme.

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Ytagu1275 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Half of the lines are waaay too long to make it even a tiny bit catchy

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VietDreamer 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's called a free-verse, no particular rule. If you read it out loud then you'll catch the rhyme.

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j1337 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I liked it, we shall all smash their heads like cantaloupes >:D

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poopymann 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

lol it sucks, a poem is only a poem if it rhymes...this didnt rhyme 100% so it sucks

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Odysseus 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

this and homeless don't rhyme, unless you say it like HomeLISS.

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VietDreamer 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Some great poets don't rhyme their poems. I took out one line because I did not like the vulgarity, that's why the rhythm is off. ^

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Faustx 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] poopymann : lol it sucks, a poem is only a poem if it rhymes...this didnt rhyme 100% so it sucks [/quote] Its called a free verse, quit hating just because it doesn't rhyme.

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VietDreamer 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This is the original http://forum.nexon.net/iTCG/forums/5211546/ShowThread.aspx

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SelusGravius 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] poopymann : lol it sucks, a poem is only a poem if it rhymes...this didnt rhyme 100% so it sucks [/quote] yeah poems that dont rhyme suck lol

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VietDreamer 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It does rhyme on the original but I did not like the vulgarity

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ApplShinR 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This... sucks. Sounds extremely amateurish.

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SelusGravius 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] VietDreamer : It does rhyme on the original but I did not like the vulgarity [/quote] LOL. did you change it to cantelopes and giraffes?

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OhKristi 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Nice haha

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Dwayne 07/23/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] poopymann : lol it sucks, a poem is only a poem if it rhymes...this didnt rhyme 100% so it sucks [/quote] I'd like you to make a poem like this. Can you? No? Shut up then.

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