The confessions of a obsessed mapler part 2 (fanfic)
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thread starter FameMonster Jul 06 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Its been 2 mouths since I started playing maple. The days have been long and lonely. Sherry will not talk to me. My mom is always busy, Worst of all my grades have drop drastically. I barely eat. I don�t sleep. The teacher said I lost the scholarship for the collage I wanted to go to. I am here playing while listening to music. Five hours have gone by and I don�t think I will stop soon. Suddenly a call from sherry. Sherry: Jeremiah why are you doing this to yourself. Me: I don�t know it help� Sherry� (crying) I love you Miah, and I don�t want anything to happen to you. Me: I love you to sherry its just� Sherry Miah just stop please Me: (hangs up) I could not deal with the intensity. I started crying over my keyboard. When my mom walked in the mood of the room just changed. I looked at her like nothing was wrong. Mom� Jeremiah what is wrong with your eyes why are they red. Me: Mom my allergies are messing with me. Mom: did you take you Medicine for it. Me: yes mommy Mom: ok sweetie dinner will be ready in a few. Me: ok She leaves the room and I get back to the game. My guild asks me to come and Zakum run. My guild usually did Zakum runs when someone new joined the guild and needed a helmet. I joined the party and we went to Zakum. The lag was horrible since my little cousins was playing the Xbox360 downstairs with wireless connection. After the run my mom called me for dinner. She made Angel hair chicken alferdo. After dinner it was 9pm. I decided to go sleep. For an hour to regain some strength. I woke up at 11pm and went and made coffee. I played maple for until 4am. I got off and decided to do my homework. After I was done it was 6pm time for me to get ready for school. After I took my shower and got dressed it was time to leave the house. Walking to school I saw Sherry she gazed at me for I didn�t really pay her attention. I walked to the bus stop and Sherry got in her car and drove off. Waiting for the bus. Dan Letterman offered me a ride to school. I got in the car. Dan: Hey J-square. Me: O hey Dan Dan: so you really into Maplestory huh. Me: I guess you can say that. Dan: I should have gave you this awhile ago but this is my username in Maplestory. I would have gave it to you when you started but I wanted you to learn how to play on your own then someone telling you. Me: o ok Dan: (pops pills) you been taking these pills? Me: I take them when I am sleepy and need to train. Dan: cool�cool We stopped at the rite aid down the street from school. Dan said you want anything I told him a blueberry Gatorade. He came back out with my drink and a medicine bag. I wonder what was in it. When we parked for school I managed to look at the bottle inside when he went to his trunk. The Description implied that the these pills were to keep you up. I got out the car went into school me and Sherry was looking at each other all day. In study hall she was across the room spying on me. I decided to walk over. When she saw me coming she act like she was studying.
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judahh24 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Yeah...suicide...that's productive...
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brub 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
This is made up rite?
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dkishot 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
yeah he said so in his first thread http://www.basilmarket.com/forum/1584548/1/28563476The_confessions_of_a_obsessed_mapler_Part_1.html#28563476
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CrossboltxX 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Is there a part 3?
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athath 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
how the heck did a new player get to lv 17x in 2 monthes?
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FireStrike 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
This became a story, interesting, but sort-of misleading.
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Harman2 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I think this story has potential. But as of right now... I did not like it. Reasons: - The spelling and grammar was just you being lazy. It was also very distracting. - The dialog was boring and rushed. - The structure of the story and some scenes are rushed.
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Killer1667 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
When are you making the next part?
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lezhu 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
guys this is a fake he said it on part 1 i like the story thought
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dragonizer1000 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
how anticlimatic-_-
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FameMonster 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
What is up with the negative comments i know i need to check my grammar but i just wanted to hurry and post...
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hunterman988 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Sad.. Story.
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Harman2 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] FameMonster : What is up with the negative comments i know i need to check my grammar but i just wanted to hurry and post... [/quote] Maybe you should edit your story's grammar now that the story is posted... Lol.
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dotdotdot96 07/06/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
[quote] Harman2 : Maybe you should edit your story's grammar now that the story is posted... Lol. [/quote] Dude, please... just be quiet. So what if he has bad grammar?
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