My new video! [: Fighting- Yellowcard
thread starter ItzAlec Jun 05 2010
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| Video. After 0:43, it's a rickroll, for other people, not Basilers. Don't watch 0:43+. I don't want to get suspended. : ALOT of mistakes. : tell me how I can improve please. |
My Characters: B00MiTzAlec - 81 Scania Hermit
LoneVampire4 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| You could have uploaded to the "videos" Why the rick roll part? |
My Characters: SweeneySopts - 120 Windia Bow Master
ItzAlec 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] LoneVampire4 : You could have uploaded to the "videos" Why the rick roll part? [/quote] No idea. For some reason, it seemed like the right thing to do. Uploading to Videos take time. |
My Characters: B00MiTzAlec - 81 Scania Hermit
kirbyfreak 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
 | You could probably do better with the timing. :o |
ItzAlec 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] kirbyfreak : You could probably do better with the timing. :o [/quote] the 2nd line appearing before the first? Rendering problem. :x |
My Characters: B00MiTzAlec - 81 Scania Hermit
Suzaku 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Skyenets
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| Hmm... the Goat dislikes. Let me get a better look and come back to you with some CnC. EDIT: Wide screen = POSSIBLE! Uninteresting typography, very general and obvious that you are new to sony vegas. In many cases the text seems cut off from the video. And it's too big. Your animation/characters are the focal. Not the text. Meaning you have to make the text smaller to take less attention. Although, the video has to become more interesting before you do that. Opening is simply 2 people standing and doing nothing. Same goes for the entire video. The entire video is very slow and nothing really happens. The song is fast and upbeat though. The animation = BAD. He's moving but at the same time he's not. The fighting scene has NO flow and the texture makes no sense at all. I haven't checked the timing yet, as someone already noticed before. But if it's a rendering error, you should just take out the error and re-render it. And yes, I know that takes a **** load of time. |
My Characters: BiIlyGoats - 173 Scania Bishop
MyEpicDK 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| can you upload the straight link i have a problem with the link you made |
My Characters: MyEpicDK - 21 Scania Warrior
ibenji 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| This seems like you where just really lazy Fight scene was hoorrid, very unsmotth, should have bene more close up I assume you are suing a sony vegas abuse the hheck out of the zoom feature. You will soon ssee MMV are all teh same You need things happending not just the words around the screen, Extremely slow pace video to the song, no MV is this slow. No ideas? watcatch the music video |
My Characters: H0mmey - 58 Scania F/P Wizard
ItzAlec 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] Skyenets : Hmm... the Goat dislikes. Let me get a better look and come back to you with some CnC. EDIT: Wide screen = POSSIBLE! Uninteresting typography, very general and obvious that you are new to sony vegas. In many cases the text seems cut off from the video. And it's too big. Your animation/characters are the focal. Not the text. Meaning you have to make the text smaller to take less attention. Although, the video has to become more interesting before you do that. Opening is simply 2 people standing and doing nothing. Same goes for the entire video. The entire video is very slow and nothing really happens. The song is fast and upbeat though. The animation = BAD. He's moving but at the same time he's not. The fighting scene has NO flow and the texture makes no sense at al. [/quote] I have no ideas. Yep, I suck. |
My Characters: B00MiTzAlec - 81 Scania Hermit
ShakeYouOff 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] Skyenets : Hmm... the Goat dislikes. Let me get a better look and come back to you with some CnC. EDIT: Wide screen = POSSIBLE! Uninteresting typography, very general and obvious that you are new to sony vegas. In many cases the text seems cut off from the video. And it's too big. Your animation/characters are the focal. Not the text. Meaning you have to make the text smaller to take less attention. Although, the video has to become more interesting before you do that. Opening is simply 2 people standing and doing nothing. Same goes for the entire video. The entire video is very slow and nothing really happens. The song is fast and upbeat though. The animation = BAD. He's moving but at the same time he's not. The fighting scene has NO flow and the texture makes no sense at al. [/quote] Don't you think your being a bit harsh. |
My Characters: TheDojo - 18 Mardia Aran Awakened
Skyenets
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] ShakeYouOff : Don't you think your being a bit harsh. [/quote] If you go to animation forums you will get stuff 10 times harsher. What I just typed can be considered very nice. Besides, if he didn't want to get criticism he shouldn't have asked for it. He shouldn't even have posted it online. @ TS: Just because I pointed out loads of errors does not mean that you suck. If you say stuff like that, then you will not improve. |
My Characters: BiIlyGoats - 173 Scania Bishop
ibenji
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] ItzAlec : I have no ideas. Yep, I suck. [/quote] If you cant even use a bit of creativity to amke this garbage qut in total. you are new to sony vegas. there are TOO many MMV makers Do something more ORGINAL like random clips www.youtube.com/pokemonandy www.youtube.com/koyousee Only ones i can think off MMV=very repetive and lame. Dont even get strated on them Not even people like www.youtube.com/xxpwhahaha are asmusing anymore aand micthlles Very good with editing. @above AGREED 1--% what we are saying is VERY VERY NICE. Thats why i doont even use those forms People thinking there all etter at ediiting then another when its just editing... when half the people can even edit on that site they just think they KNOW stuff www.youtube.com/joehans0me <~~ skills |
My Characters: H0mmey - 58 Scania F/P Wizard
ItzAlec 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] Skyenets : If you go to animation forums you will get stuff 10 times harsher. What I just typed can be considered very nice. [/quote] Oh. So they'll cuss me out? :| |
My Characters: B00MiTzAlec - 81 Scania Hermit
Skyenets 06/05/10
+ PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
| [quote] ItzAlec : Oh. So they'll cuss me out? :| [/quote] They wont cuss you out. They will murder you alive c:. |
My Characters: BiIlyGoats - 173 Scania Bishop
BasilMarket is Copyright 2004-2008 BasilMarket.com (archive reconstruction). Data recovered from the Internet Archive Wayback Machine for the Classic MapleStory community.
