Another attempt at drawing

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thread starter malapo Apr 02 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

http://malapo.deviantart.com/art/Just-A-Random-Guy-2-159344320 hi comments and advice appreciated

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Canoe 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's garbage. The way you draw eyes makes me want to gouge my own out.

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Chawcolate 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's cute, nice try.

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DustInTheWind 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Draw the body before you draw the head. It's disproportionate. As far as anime goes, it's pretty nice. Not much you can do with anime. It's pretty simplistic. I'd recommend getting into more realistic works then heading to stylized works. That's the path most take.

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1337Mastz0r 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Good try, but try using shading and more realistic faces.

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benben2006 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Uh, I like your Gintama reference :D

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RikunFrances 04/02/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Everything is too flat, eyes too out of proportion, no emotion, no light source, face too out of proportion, hair too flat and mismatching head. Good try, keep at it. That is all the advice I can give.

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iamson + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] Canoe : It's garbage. The way you draw eyes makes me want to gouge my own out. [/quote] Hey hey, we all have our own opinions. I mean, no need to be so harsh. OT: Average, I'd say--coming from an expertise stick-figurist.

ImKafei + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Bad. You can barely see ears. Hair doesn't even look like a cartoon, looks like a fake weird mop. Eyebrows are straight lines. There is no emotion. You did it on lined paper. There's no shading. I don't like the nose, it looks like you spent 1 second it on it. The neck looks like a log. The shirt looks like it's plastic and not a cloth. Basically, you fail, but with practice you can do much better.

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malapo + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] DustInTheWind : Draw the body before you draw the head. It's disproportionate. As far as anime goes, it's pretty nice. Not much you can do with anime. It's pretty simplistic. I'd recommend getting into more realistic works then heading to stylized works. That's the path most take. [/quote] i always start with the eyes first. i guess i'll try from the body first [quote] 1337Mastz0r : Good try, but try using shading and more realistic faces. [/quote] i actually don't know how to shade. i'm just a beginner. but i'll look up some guides [quote] RikunFrances : Everything is too flat, eyes too out of proportion, no emotion, no light source, face too out of proportion, hair too flat and mismatching head. Good try, keep at it. That is all the advice I can give. [/quote] what do you mean by flat? light source? i actually didn't want any emotions [quote] ImKafei : Bad. You can barely see ears. Hair doesn't even look like a cartoon, looks like a fake weird mop. Eyebrows are straight lines. There is no emotion. You did it on lined paper. There's no shading. I don't like the nose, it looks like you spent 1 second it on it. The neck looks like a log. The shirt looks like it's plastic and not a cloth. Basically, you fail, but with practice you can do much better. [/quote] i tried to block the ears with hair cuz i cant draw ears that was sorta intentional (no emotion) i'm saving paper (the printer ones) aren't necks suppose to be logs? why? (plastic shirt)

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