Comment on my poetry?

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thread starter t3hhappifaic Mar 11 2010 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I was wondering what you guys thought of this. Please leave realistic comments, don't post random BS thanks A soul set free, brought away from life Looks down upon the earth with open eyes It sees the true beauty that none can see But all the same watches other souls Locked inside a physical jail A body which it cannot leave Watching this he cries out for their freedom The winds twirl, seas rage, and mountains bleed Souls are set free from their prisons and live again Yet more remain trapped, one day to be set free Thanks... I hope O.O

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Akaneo 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Nice copy pasta, I searched it up on google and what do you know.

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t3hhappifaic 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

seriously? O.O I swear i wrote it on my own and have never seen it before O.O

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SanHan + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Edit: Nvm, I found it from Google.. -.-

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DemonicUnicorn 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

it is pretty good

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Millesimus 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] Akaneo : Nice copy pasta, I searched it up on google and what do you know. [/quote] 13 hours ago. HMMMM.

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Akaneo 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] Millesimus : 13 hours ago. HMMMM. [/quote] Yeah, I noticed that. So TC, are you TheBlind?

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Popcorn 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Do you have an account on AllPoetry?

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azel088 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Didn't really like it.

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t3hhappifaic + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] Akaneo : Yeah, I noticed that. So TC, are you TheBlind? [/quote] yeah cuz my it wouldnt log in then i found out that i just couldnt make it remember name and pass and it would log me in BTW why do you ask? and i seriously didnt know it was on google xD Edit: oh yeah xD i put it on there but i didnt really do anything with it xD didnt expect that O.O i swear though i did write it

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Akaneo + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

[quote] t3hhappifaic : yeah cuz my it wouldnt log in then i found out that i just couldnt make it remember name and pass and it would log me in BTW why do you ask? and i seriously didnt know it was on google xD Edit: oh yeah xD i put it on there but i didnt really do anything with it xD didnt expect that O.O i swear though i did write it [/quote] Oh yeah, how old are you? Your poetry is quite good.

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t3hhappifaic 03/11/10 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

15, i originally did it for english class

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