Songs of the Siren: Chapter 1
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thread starter infferrno Aug 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
This was formally known as 'Traitors' A/N: This MIGHT be the last chapter I write for a long, long, long, etc... time... Why? According to my parents, my writing is a bad habit. >.> Also, my Jr year in High School starts... in other words, my future. This said, I have been pretty bummed and sort of half-assed it towards the end... BTW... did you know that an author's writing can express their mood? Guess mine. A/N: You might wonder why my dialogs sucks more than the tube at a liposuction clinic... well that's because I hate talking. tl,dr: Hit 'Alt + F4' Prologue: The world, an end shall see And a kingdom undone A dark age there shall be When all bow to one. Child of Fire, Ice, and Thunder Shall cause the earth to sunder. For by Bera the child shall be evoked He, a passion of vengeance shall be cloaked For blood shall be spilt for blood�s death And all shall fall to the Reaper�s depth. -Goddess Minerva -- A low guttural roar swept across the rugged plains of Perion, echoing in the distant mountains, the humid air adding tension to the peaceful grounds, as if the very land was holding its breath; waiting for the inevitable. Amidst the rugged terrain, a village lay nestled in an indentation in the earth. As the night dragged on, the winds dampened and a deep sigh seemed to rise from the ground as the land let up its pent up breath, sweeping across the withered and charred ground. The browned stalks of grass rose in the tender breeze, dancing along with the gentle rays of the moon. A murmur ran through the plains as the gentle wind wafted through the darkened grass. A blanket of silence and darkness lay over the lands as Night herself held the earth in her calming arms. -- Somewhere in the distance, amongst the sparse vegetation and jagged rocks, a shadow stirred. In the dark of a willowy tree, a tall figure rose to full height and stepped from the shadows. The darkness seemed to melt off his form, crawling off him as if in fear, back into the night. As the darkness subsided, the features of a muscular man became prominent. The man stood at over six feet tall, thick, dark, coarse hair cascaded from his cranium, held together with a loose headband. A thick ropy scar ran from his bony cheek down into the depths of the bandana covering the bottom half of his face. His skin looked withered and dry; an unhealthy brown hue lay on his hide. Light leather armor adorned his figure, cracked and covered in dirt from travel. Mail backed gloves were set on his coarse hands and steel plated boots fastened to his feet. The dark clothing blended the man into the darkness, making him one with the night. From the folds of his leather garment, the man pulled out a blood-red dagger, its edges reflected the glow of the moon as it slid from its sheath. The Chief Bandit twirled his weapon experimentally in his right hand. A light whistle split the otherwise silent grounds as the iridescent blade danced in the man�s palm. Once the final tendrils melted off his body, the ma
mechadax 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
kewl i read it all was a nice timepasser
infferrno 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
mechadax : kewl i read it all was a nice timepasser Thanks! :D +1 for Good things today... score is now... 1 to 2000000000
ApplShinR 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Yay! I thought it was pretty awesome. Go post it on fanfic.
infferrno 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
ApplShinR : Yay! I thought it was pretty awesome. Go post it on fanfic. I will later. xD
hztx 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
I would read it, but I am way too lazy
infferrno 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
hztx : I would read it, but I am way too lazy Lol that's okay. I know it's a huge wall.
xnoobninja Aug 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Haha, just had to say. I was skimming it, and I saw "The Beginning of the End". Lol, reminds me of "The Beginning of the End of the Beginning" (or something like that) by the smashing pumpkins. I'm going to read it now :D After I read it.. Lol. It's actually quite good. :o Keep it up
infferrno 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
xnoobninja : Haha, just had to say. I was skimming it, and I saw "The Beginning of the End". Lol, reminds me of "The Beginning of the End of the Beginning" (or something like that) by the smashing pumpkins. I'm going to read it now :D Lolz. :P Forgot to change the title of the chapter... oops
issacrandom 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
Ooh, I like it :D Very, easy to picture in my mind
xnoobninja 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
infferrno : Lolz. :P Forgot to change the title of the chapter... oops Oh, haha
mariorks543 08/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
That was really fantastic. Like, most fanfics (which I consider this to somewhat be, but it's hard to place this great piece of writing with that other crap) are pretty damn awful, but this was fantastic. Looking forward to reading the next installment whenever that comes about. Blew me away.
infferrno Aug 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
mariorks543 : That was really fantastic. Like, most fanfics (which I consider this to somewhat be, but it's hard to place this great piece of writing with that other crap) are pretty damn awful, but this was fantastic. Looking forward to reading the next installment whenever that comes about. Blew me away. I really thank you for that compliment. That really just made my day. :] issacrandom : Ooh, I like it :D Very, easy to picture in my mind Good... mean's that I'm doing my job correctly. xD
jmankhan 09/01/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT
you spelled ellinia wrong in the very beginning of chapter one
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