Basil Revolution | 3: Downfall

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thread starter Doomsday777 Jul 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Chapter 1 Here Chapter 2 Here Basil Revolution 3: Downfall 12/31/2007 10:30 p.m. �So all we have to do is kill this person, and the moderators will give us money for her bounty, right?� Kazum asked. �That�s what Omar told me,� I responded. �With the amount of money he�s offering, my brother and I can eat for a month.� I looked through the window, and saw PQtheif, a nice old lady that was once the owner of a grocery store. After her son got in a fight, she disowned him, and to this day no one knows what happened to him. That�s beside the point though, since this story isn�t about her son. As I pulled the trigger, it was as if time had stood still. I had hit my target however, and a mixture of brain and blood splattered against the window. For some reason though, the house began to catch on fire. �Let�s get out of here before the moderators and Mr.Basil come.� Kazum hurried. It was that day I had become what had seemed to many a monster. I am not a monster however. No sir. That is just mere opinion. I alone know that Omar is the REAL monster. He is the one who had told me to kill PQ theif. He is the cause of my downfall. *One hour later* �Omar, I killed PQtheif just as you told me,� I told him as he walked by me. �Can I have my money now?� He said nothing. *Twenty minutes later* There was a knock on my door. �Go answer it.� My brother told me. Listening to him at that moment was the worst decision I would make in my life. As I opened the door, my wrist was struck by an arrow. �By decree of Mister Basil, you are now banished from the town of basilmarket. You are to leave immediately. Your house will be repossessed, and your brother will be placed in an orphanage.� Omar spoke to me coldly. I couldn�t believe it. I was betrayed. �WE HAD A DEAL OMAR. WE HAD A DEAL.� I screamed, as I was dragged out of what used to be my home. �Write to me brother.� My brother yelled as I was taken away from him for good. ** As I looked at what used to be my home, I could hear the screams of little basilers, counting down the seconds to the New Year. As I looked at my wrist, I promised myself that I would not trust anyone after what had happened today. Trust is weakness, and now that I am alone, there was no need for weakness. The weak perish, and the strong prosper. 5�4�3�2�1 End of 3. Reposted due to the thread being deleted due to doomsdaylives being deleted. My feedback is fixed though :D Off to play my CK!

ICantKs Jul 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

But I thought your other account was your main.. Edit: I SEE. Well I'l be off reading the first two chapters. Toodles!

RJustice 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

The first two were better. This one wasn't as interesting.

Doomsday777 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

RJustice said: "The first two were better. This one wasn't as interesting." I know, I didn't like creating this chapter. Once it goes back to regular time, the quality will go back up.

oakland4515 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Hmmmmm...

RJustice 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Doomsday777 said: " I know, I didn't like creating this chapter. Once it goes back to regular time, the quality will go back up." Alright Who's your brother supposed to be? Or is that a secret too? :O

MonkeyHelper 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You only put popular people in your story because that's what will appeal to Basilers. I thought you were going to put one regular person after 3 stories, but you haven't and it's starting to get lame.

Doomsday777 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

MonkeyHelper said: "You only put popular people in your story because that's what will appeal to Basilers. I thought you were going to put one regular person after 3 stories, but you haven't and it's starting to get lame." You seem to be forgetting about a certain doctor.

RJustice 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

lankesh 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Great story right here. Keep it up.

kokdakjee92 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Why do i see korean characters in random areas?

MonkeyHelper Jul 29 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

RJustice said: " I think he put up a thread in which he asked for volunteers. Though you are right to some extent, it doesn't consist of only popular people." He did ask for volunteers, but most of the people he picked were the popular people from that thread. Edit: Fine, there was one regular basiler; ClementZ.

lastman28 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Finally its out. So.. omar was this mysterious archer?

Doomsday777 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

lastman28 said: "Finally its out. So.. omar was this mysterious archer?" Yes. I decided to let that cat out of the bag, as there are some people that don't like the complex plot.

ZappyPantz 07/29/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

A++ Would read again.