Care to comment on my painting?

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thread starter XImAGhostX Jul 21 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Well, it's my first painting really. Just decided to put it up on deviant. Criticism is expected. While you're at it you can check my poetry. http://iendru.deviantart.com/art/Artist-s-Circuitry-130393042 Thanks in advance. I took the picture with my mom's crappy 3MP camera. It's bound to be not clear.

Drag0nKlnght 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Meh, I've seen better.

LogicCannon 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You have blistering talent.

phididdy111 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Never have I seen such a horrid thing.

VirgilDiablo Jul 21 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's not bad, but any advice I could give you would come from you practicing (technique, etc). From one painter to another though, when you do a painting like that, you should have more overlapping, to where one pipe overlaps some, underlaps others, so you've got a lot more perspective

FreeSamples 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Good stuff mang. What is it?

wakypenguin 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

i've never really been the type to critique abstract art ._. the only thing i can say is that.. its creative.. but i dun really liek how the colors clash (that's just me)

KiRbY 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Reminds me of the connect the pipe game on my phone. OT: I know nothing of art but good job ;)

Etokapa 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

The pic looks kinda blurry. Is it supposed to be that way?

tiganior1 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Looks like the 'Pipes' screensaver in old XP models.

DualWolf 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

tiganior1 said: "Looks like the 'Pipes' screensaver in old XP models." That's what I thought. I suck at looking at abstract but I can see some sort of..purpose inside of it.

ZinkSlayer 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's certainly not bad at all! Good job :D But it's also... missing something.

iRFun 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Drag0nKlnght said: "Meh, I've seen better." draw me better.

tiganior1 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

DualWolf said: " That's what I thought. I suck at looking at abstract but I can see some sort of..purpose inside of it." Pssh, screw that! The bottom line is that it made me remember the old maze screensaver. Now I need to download it again. Joking, good painting. It made me get nostalgia.

VirgilDiablo 07/21/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Piping is a common form of abstract