An EPIC Basil Market Poem!

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thread starter aaaaz95 Jul 10 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

READ FIRST! I hope you will enjoy reading this. It took me about 2 hours to write, because I�m a perfectionist. I actually think the ending half is a little weaker than the beginning half. I used an AABB pattern. If you think I should add/change something, please leave me a comment, and I�ll take a look. Anyways, enjoy~ Friends, neighbors, students and geeks, Gather 'round and here me now speak. Bout� a site called Basil, coolest of all. So now that you listen, do I enthrall? But what is so cool? What makes it so great? Ok! Jeez, I�ll tell you. Just calm down and wait. First come the auctions, you buy and you sell. Get positive feedback, for doing so well. But negative feedback, can follow you round�, If trades do not go, so safe and so sound. Next come the threads, so fun and so cool, �Help! I�m dying!� �Do you like school?� �Let�s play a game.� �My car just got towed...� Got your attention? Then onward, lets go! If you have time, check out recent screens, Where artwork is new, and made by us teens. Foxy, Raine, and Ramune are the best, But let�s give a big hand as well to the rest! Listings are neat, just set up an ad, When responses pour in, you sure will be glad. Need a friend, a leech, or a guild? Presto! Zam! Your wish is fulfilled. From drawings and threads, to oodles of fun, Basil�s stuff is surely number one! Phew... Wow, time really flies! And now some shoutouts to all of you guys! DOLLY, you are super duper weird. Ramunesin man, you gotta shave that beard! Kkelvinn, here�s a shoutout for you! CrownedSorrow, fine... one for you too. GarretC, I dunno what to say... Random blobs, you are kinda... erm... gray? Lastly, thanks to Mr. B, mods and friends, Love, peace, and Basil till the very end! About The Shoutouts Some people just wanted me to put their names in, so I did.

aaaaz95 Jul 10 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Like what? Edit: Do you guys know if this is in the right section?

ramunesin 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Sun gods don't shave.

CrownedSorrow 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Thats good :D thanks for mentioning me.

qwicker Jul 10 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Basil freestyle. ABAB I know i'm not in position and I may be out of line But I just had to get it out So I'll share with you all, mine Basil is really helpful theres guides and info gallore you can buy, sell, and trade with strangers what else can you ask for? the threads are where its at theres always that basil drama "i need your help" "whos hotter?" "Would you date obama?" The screenies are all entertaining some make my top 10 list But others get people wondering why did Mr. Basil accept this? just letting u all know I'm at work right now so I needed some time to kill so thanks for the poem aaaaz95 and thank you all from basil

aaaaz95 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

OMG! That was so sweet! XD Lol at the Obama. :P Wow, and that only took you like 5 minutes to write. Nice. :]

heinous Jul 10 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Eh, it's not my style, but it's cool. I like ABAB better.

qwicker 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

BTW I haven't forgotten about your picture =P I've just had my hands tied, I'll start colouring it now!

aaaaz95 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

heinous said: "Eh, it's not my style, but it's cool. I like ABAB better." Ok, I'll take that into consideration if I decide to write another poem about something else. But that would be another 2 hours down the drain ><

MizMisa 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

OT: Great poem! Really catchy. qwicker: Also good poem :0!

jakelyrx 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Geeks doesn't rhyme with speak.

infiniteIQx 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

It's good, but IMO ABAB>AABB. =P

aaaaz95 Jul 10 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

jakelyrx said: "Geeks doesn't rhyme with speak." The base words rhyme. As in geek[s] and speak Edit: And already my poem is dead :'[

darkstarx7 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I imagined it as a rap. Awesome poem though! I'm saving it.

ChosenOne777 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

awsome poem i like how it rhymes im not a fan of ABAB (no rhymes >.< and idk the rythem) hope this trhead stays alive really good keap up the good work =D make a poem with me in it =D jk

aaaaz95 07/10/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

A rap? O_O Hey yo wassap dude I gotta tell u bout my food It's tasty Yeah! Yeah! It's tasty Yeah! Yeah! I dunno O_O Thats like to the tune of hey mickey