Paper. Pencil. Art.

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thread starter patsaccount May 20 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Art. The pencil glided across the bright, white sheet of paper. It left a thick trail of darkness, laying a beautiful design wherever it went. The hand holding the pencil was rough. It looked dry and cracked, with scars from the past. The hand appeared to have once wielded great power, but now it only shaded on the paper. It was a sight to watch the hand guide the pencil across the sheet. The fingers on the hand moved with ease, fluidity, and utter grace. They all � the hand, its fingers, and the pencil � seemed to be one, one in making art. Glancing at the cracked skin of the hand, it looked as if the hand was in sheer pain, but it nonetheless went on to make the design. Every little movement for it was a struggle, a fight against agony. But still, it moved, it went on to finish the design. The other hand was resting upon the paper, just to the left of the design. It rested at most times, but at others it shifted the paper while the pencil was working. The second hand seemed also to be part of the unit, and refused to have pause for anything. All at once, the unit stopped. The first hand set the pencil aside, and lifted the paper from the dark oak table. The hand proceeded to lift the paper, deemed it good, and placed it on the wall to the side. The hand picked up a blank piece of paper, then the pencil. Then art. Thanks for reading. Please offer corrections and opinions.

Hoppesangen 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This story turned me on.

patsaccount 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Hoppesangen said: "This story turned me on." Not exactly what the purpose was, but you know, whatever floats ur boat.

devinkk 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

do something more erotic, you have talent. great for incest stories.

patsaccount 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

devinkk said: "do something more erotic, you have talent. great for incest stories." Sorry, just not my thing. Have you ever read James Patterson? Well I might try something like that if I get desperate. Otherwise, no.

devinkk 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

patsaccount said: " Sorry, just not my thing. Have you ever read James Patterson? Well I might try something like that if I get desperate. Otherwise, no." ur just wasting your talent then. incest stories can be your future.

ShiroNoYami 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

PEN! >:O

Zenfayte 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This person really needs to moisturize.

patsaccount May 20 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Zenfayte said: "This person really needs to moisturize." It's a symbol, nothing more. devinkk said: "ur just wasting your talent then. incest stories can be your future." There's plenty of brilliant books out there without incest. I'd rather shy away from that as long as I can. But thanks anyways.

Emyrie 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I thought this was beautiful actually but just a suggestion; I feel like the second paragraph does not flow as well as the first. The first paragraph was really really mesmerizing. And, maybe this is just a symbol you're portraying but why did you describe the hand to be in pain? I do not rather understand how that relates.

xbabyy 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

devinkk said: "do something more erotic, you have talent. great for incest stories." This.

heinous 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Last part was full of win.

HoboSpit 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

ShiroNoYami said: " PEN! >:O " link MS paint. it's the PMS dragon

magesRbest 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I really like this story. :D What was the design?

BlueOrder 05/20/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

patsaccount said: " Sorry, just not my thing. Have you ever read James Patterson? Well I might try something like that if I get desperate. Otherwise, no." I love James Patterson.... The Lake House. :D My favorite.