my review on maplestory

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thread starter xdarkshynobi May 13 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Ive just started writing game reviews critizes on my grammer and anything else please and ty >,< link

dashx4 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You already failed for misspelling "grammar".

Tatufiuz 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You didn't really describe the game at all.

xdarkshynobi May 13 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Aww crap i suck=/ Edit: beside the grammer mistakes i should elbrate on the game more?

Luddienator 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You kinda jump to the critisism immediately. Start explaining the concept and such, and then start naming pros and cons. As a conclusion make a balance of these pros and cons and give your opinion.

Drunko 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I don't think there should be PVP Think about it... Bishops....

volcanocube 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

lol ''There a sorta lottery game you can play and if you're lucky there a chance you can get something worth you're wild.''

xdarkshynobi 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

volcanocube said: "lol ''There a sorta lottery game you can play and if you're lucky there a chance you can get something worth you're wild.''" lmfao WELL there is =/

volcanocube May 13 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

There a sorta lottery game you can play and if you're lucky there a chance you can get something worth you're wild. There is a sort of lottery/gachapon (you could have just named this gachapon..) you can use and if you're lucky you can get something worthy Something like that..

DaDarkAbyss May 13 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

The Graphics are very kiddish

soddycot May 13 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

You should work on your grammar, when i read the review it felt like writing isn't you're strong suit. Also there is no need to go into in game abbreviations like nx, this isn't a guide it's a review. Sorry if this sounds harsh, it's not supposed to

NasalGoo 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Lol not trying to be mean but it needs a lot of work, And when using maplestory jargon make sure you explain what it means because most people reading the review wont know anyhting about maplestory. And try to use real words not words like kiddish :P

feh 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Luddienator said: "You kinda jump to the critisism immediately. Start explaining the concept and such, and then start naming pros and cons. As a conclusion make a balance of these pros and cons and give your opinion." ^. and try to elaborate your points.

iCrisis 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Grammar is terrible, you fail to accurately review the game, and it doesn't sound professional whatsover.

JJ11221 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Drunko said: "I don't think there should be PVP Think about it... Bishops...." if they make PvP im pretty sure they would take things like that out for it... i mean there are restrictions even in JQs so they should put PvP in