MS Addicted: A Story of Addicts (2)

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thread starter DevilZen May 12 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This thread was made because surprisingly, I can't fit anymore text into the first part of the story which you can find if you search "MS Addicted: A Story of Addicts". I can't post URLs yet.. but I will be able to soon. Check out my auctions? Anyways. here's the continuation of chapter 17. Seventeen, continued. Slightly after passing the swing set and storage keeper, a puff of dark gas shot into the street from what seemed to be the armor shop. The matter grazed Max�s clothes and he looked down to see if there was a mark left. Everyone had noticed and glanced at the armor shop to see what might have caused this. After realizing the shop was just closing, Jin, Sarah, and Jessica went on with their business. But Max was frozen. After making sure his clothes weren�t marked from the gas, he glanced over to his left at where the gas had shot. The cloud was materializing, and soon took form of a person. He was facing the opposite way of Max and his friends as the man�s hood fell back. A man in a dark cloak. A man Max had seen before. A man with ridiculously obnoxious hair. The Toben Man that had broken into Max�s house. The man that had attempted to kill Max and his family. Max�s jaw dropped and after a second or two, he began to run towards the man. The mysterious Toben man turned around from the sound of feet breaking the ice, as Max was a mere 10 yards away from him; they made eye contact; the man turned and sprinted away from Max. �JIN, FOLLOW ME, NOW!� Max screamed. Without thought Jin launched himself to where Max was while the two girls stood in awe, confused and startled. The two boys broke into a high-speed chase on foot through the frozen town, towards the cloaked figure.

HotGolfer64 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Keep writing more of this, it's a really great story that more people should read. It makes you look at the better side of Maplestory, the side that doesn't obsess over damage and leveling the quickest.

NightMenace 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Add meh in, please! =3...

EmperorP 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Compared to your other chapter this one is pretty short.

twist 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

love this story ♥ keep writing!

SinOfCats 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I read all chapters every few days

Ellinia 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

For those of you, who want the beginning of this story. link

Wolfz 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

and matt went on for 12 months at the same lvl

PointedLaser May 12 2009 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I love the story. :D Not to be one of those weird people, but I believe Max should be capitalized in the sentence "Without thought Jin launched himself to where M ax was while the two girls stood in awe, confused and startled"

tailedfox13 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

I like da story. XD

AssassinDude 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Zomg epic storyline. Good job

DevilZen 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Kieyl, thank you very much for posting a link. Pointedlaser, thank you for pointing that out, I fixed it. :]

NightMenace 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Wolfz said: "and matt went on for 12 months at the same lvl" And Wolfie kept on screwing up characters, discarding them, and starting over.

doughboy13 05/12/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

Great story, keep writing

cluo40 05/13/09 + PM | QUOTE | PERMALINK | REPORT

This is so great! Keep it up