WoW some arms, the legs look good tho.

darkmage1431 said: "yeah work on the body. its way to big. also try to add some shape to the arms. try looking here, they have really good tips. not bad-- keep practicing. :]" Thanks a lot. I will practise and try again someday.

yeah work on the body. its way to big. also try to add some shape to the arms. try looking here, they have really good tips. not bad-- keep practicing. :] link

Holy crap her torso is fat o.o

GintokiS said: "The eyes and hair is fine it's just everything else needs work no offense." It's okay. I'm practising drawing so it wasn't meant to be perfect. As I wrote into description, "First attempt"

The eyes and hair is fine it's just everything else needs work no offense.