I don't think it is perfect. There are many ways I can improve, and thanks to the people that told me how. I am working on a new banner now, and the next comic will have 12 panels.

OmerrrrRRR SO HarddcURE!..

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" Before posting something, think about what you're saying. it's called criticism and tips . Besides, do you want us to lie and let her stay the same, to never improve, to bore us? (sorry comic maker!).

"I have to kill this guy" miss miss "who is this kid" I didn't enjoy. Sorry.

Deathlyblue said: "it doesnt NEED to be critiqued. everyones opinion of a perfect comic is different and maybe its perfect to her" we know its perfect to her. we're just telling her what to improve on because its what WE want to see. its fine that she sees it as a good comic, and its not bad, it just needs work. -constructive critcism-

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" 1] I think the word you're looking for is "treating." 2] We're complimenting that she improved because she improved. No more than that. 3] We are commenting on what she could improve even more, because she still has roo

it doesnt NEED to be critiqued. everyones opinion of a perfect comic is different and maybe its perfect to her

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" threating? nosuchword. also, her comic isn't perfect, so we critique it duh.

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" How is that threatening me? They just want to tell me how I can improve and make better comics. And no comic can be perfect, there are always people who find something wrong with it.

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" ...because it has to be good...if we like it... Why? because it makes sense.

Sungmin said: "What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?" I don't mean to be mean, but, If it was great , there wouldn't be any comments like that. Think about that.

What the hell is it with people threating this girl like a comic noob? Like everytime she makes a comic, people are saying 'You improved, but please do that and that and this and this' Why does it have to be freaken PERFECT before Basil users are accepting comics?

i like it make more!

Short and boring. But somehow I like it...

You definitely improved. Although the story is still stiff, and a bit boring.