germy300 said: "First, it shows a someone in some robot suit thing and a cat golden wolf thing with a knife fighting, then, it shows two brothers on the computer and one brother walks away needing to do something, then it show five people wearing masks in cloaks and there's a spy and there's some transparent person on the floor and the end comic ends. What run-on sentence?" He's watching the Power Rangers :X.

First, it shows a someone in some robot suit thing and a cat golden wolf thing with a knife fighting, then, it shows two brothers on the computer and one brother walks away needing to do something, then it show five people wearing masks in cloaks and there's a spy and there's some transparent person on the floor and the end comic ends. What run-on sentence?

batman! nuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuh BATMAN! nuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuhnuh xD

You might wanna take efg out of your comics. Just so yeah know, i mean, hes closely affilated with...um fail? other than that not bad.

I couldn't stop thinking "cliche" through the whole thing, sorry.

This doesn't make sense =(

I think the storyline is the first 3 panels was just a tv series.And then the brown hair metro dude had to go kill bad guys but the masked guys found out he was there and there gonna kill him

efg? o sh- oot.

The whole "Double Story of reality and fantasy land" doesn't work so well anymore. Not to mention the plot is kinda weak, and pretty boring. Also, choose a better name than Renegades. Use something creative. I hate redundant names that just sound cool.

are there like, two storylines? Coz the first line and the last two don't correspond.

It's nice so far, just improve the storyline :P

dats 1 maple nx ho

koen12 said: " he's not your buddy, guy" I'm not your guy, friend k lets stop with this spam XD flame me for making a corny comic!

IDONTCAREITSUCK said: " I'm not your brah,buddy." he's not your buddy, guy

mapleSoul said: " No problem brah. :O" I'm not your brah,buddy.