alexie828 said: "ummm...the lips....please.... o.o fix please and the folds on the jacket could use a little work" Those aren't his lips, he's blown a bubble.

ummm...the lips....please.... o.o fix please and the folds on the jacket could use a little work

SecretSquirl said: " oooor...theyre ripped..?" his skin...is grey?...

His eyes should be a lot higher up

DomoKun said: "he either has really shiny pants, or lightning bolt designs on them." oooor...theyre ripped..?

No ears. Duh?

he either has really shiny pants, or lightning bolt designs on them.

Wide forehead. Nice clean lineart though (unlike mine, haha)

His head and hair are ridiculously large. I assume there is a large amount of blood in there. -licks lips-

Too shiny.

I like the wings ^.^ but as stated before: huge forehead and head is too skinny.

I really like it~! The only thing that I find a bit off is the head is a bit narrow... Widen the face a bit, maybe? Other than that, I really love it~! Better than anything I could draw! XD

I cant tell where the tie and Im guessing the inside of the shirt ends? Its kinda confusing and threw me off a bit. Try to make those a little different, shade it differently or shorten the tie.

Big forehead.

u forgot the little purple wings in ur hair but other then that nice job