sobadude said: "My constructive critisism: Try giving him a chin and not making the bottom part of his face so round. You could also try giving him a neck. And it looks a lot like he stuffed a pillow in his shirt. The eyes could use some work. Also try not to just draw an ear floating in midair, try to actually connect it with the rest of his face. The arm looks like its coming out of the side of the guy's breast and not the shoulder. Legs usually aren't two straight lines, they have muscles. Hi

My constructive critisism: Try giving him a chin and not making the bottom part of his face so round. You could also try giving him a neck. And it looks a lot like he stuffed a pillow in his shirt. The eyes could use some work. Also try not to just draw an ear floating in midair, try to actually connect it with the rest of his face. The arm looks like its coming out of the side of the guy's breast and not the shoulder. Legs usually aren't two straight lines, they have muscles. His earring could

the neck disappeared o:

bisain said: "Hmm....Try drawing the head first? It looks like the head pops out of the skin...(if you know what I mean). Also, how old are you? Because if you are young, you can improve a lot, " Yea I also draw the head first.....and I know what u mean by head popping out cuz i noticed that... I'm only 11 so I think I can improve

Hmm....Try drawing the head first? It looks like the head pops out of the skin...(if you know what I mean). Also, how old are you? Because if you are young, you can improve a lot,

AlexZ0123 said: "I hate it. Please never submit anything again." Do shut the hell up...Try drawing sometime and U will see u are worser than me

i c wat u did thar

... next time, pay more attention to the neck/shoulder part. You should also add more hair, and connect the ear to the head.

I hate it. Please never submit anything again.

She looks like a dude in this drawing o_o

one question, are you trying to go with the chibi look? or do you want more of a real life-ish person? i can try to help on both.