BassChan said: "You dislike how his left eye...? Was there an end to that sentence?" he dislikes how his left eye interrupts his train of thought with parenthetical messages.

its cute

SEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX omg nice ;P

You dislike how his left eye...? Was there an end to that sentence?

You sort of draw the eyes like how I draw the eyes on chibis. XDDD Nice job, though~

I personally think the shoulders are to straight... It looks as if he is shrugging or something.

That's not a mouth, that's a tea cup :P

you need to make the eyes bigger and lower on the face and the body a bit chubbier.