Bewildered ep 1
Submitted by innerchibi
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Comments (15)
MrAero 01/05/09
Gotta love moobies...
kiwiix33 01/03/09
I love his man boobs.
4znxmage 12/31/08Best. Comic. Evar.
SinL0rdz 12/30/08
fiirexstory said: "Might want to check your spelling and grammar. o.o Why is the guy wearing a nurse dress in the ninth panel? O-O" True that, true that
patrick55555 12/30/08
Don't even think of continuing this.
fiirexstory 12/29/08
Might want to check your spelling and grammar. o.o Why is the guy wearing a nurse dress in the ninth panel? O-O
gThreat 12/29/08
Wow, I didn't know a flashback could damage you that bad. Where'd you get the bandage? Wayy to typical.
l3lader 12/29/08
Random guy walks and suddenly attacked by some other random dude. Guy wakes up somewhere unknown. The random dude brings him to his master. Yup this seems original.
XFlameKniteX 12/29/08
Master wants you in a dress. =]
ChaosHero95 12/29/08
Ok... im not going to point out whats wrong with it. Lets see whats good about it. Editing: Um... theres still the bannedstory background around the character. You didnt even bother tracing the bitmaps. Story/plot: ummm not really cliche, mostly because most people make the comic after they have the plot down. And plus the same guy that was trying to beat the crap out of him is just talking to him very calmly in the last 2 panels. Grammar: Do I even have to tell you? Overall: This looks like it
Sunny910910 12/29/08
Unknown Green guy said: " The master wants you" Lol
blueboy 12/29/08
idkdude said: "Wow this is really really bad, and he is in the void because you were too lazy to give your comic a point or background. Way too many comics start with a main character spontaneously being hit or with the main character narrating about nothing useful then saying "This is how it happened" or "This is my story." Your comic does both." Also add the fact that his editing skills suck
AznAks 12/29/08
Total lack of correct sentences make this a english horror.
stevechow987
I enjoy people who try making comics, but please sharpen your skills and put more effort before posting
heckguy 12/29/08
Someone enjoys talking to himself. Ain't that right Heck? Yes he does Heck, such a strange person. Indeed.
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