are you a gm? how coem ot have a gun?

l3lader said: "Shadow should be longer and should be pointing to the opposite side of where the light is coming from. you made it seem as if the light was coming from above but the shadow on the body make it seem as if it's coming from the left side. The proportions are awesome, so you just need to improve the drawing skills and shadowing effects. And then you could take it to the next step by adding light effects and such " Oh yeah, I totally forgot about the shadows underneath. xD Thanks for t

UseTheForce said: " Could you point out how these could be improved?" Shadow should be longer and should be pointing to the opposite side of where the light is coming from. you made it seem as if the light was coming from above but the shadow on the body make it seem as if it's coming from the left side. The proportions are awesome, so you just need to improve the drawing skills and shadowing effects. And then you could take it to the next step by adding light effects and such

ChaosHero95 said: "I think color would make it very cool :P Its a very nice drawing except for the bow, maybe some not blocky form for it, so it would kinda narrow into points." Okay, thanks.

I think color would make it very cool :P Its a very nice drawing except for the bow, maybe some not blocky form for it, so it would kinda narrow into points.

l3lader said: "Proportions are great, just work on the face, hair (except if thats your style) , and shadow placement." Could you point out how these could be improved?

Proportions are great, just work on the face, hair (except if thats your style) , and shadow placement.

Kirigishi said: "Nice. :O Thanks a bunch." You're welcome. ;) @Pedrof: Thanks for the constructive feedback

Nice. :O Thanks a bunch.

uhmmm, needs a little more work on the bow, thats too 'square', and the face/head i really like the shading and pose i want to see more of your drawings

Haha, awesome.

Ireum said: "Work on the mouth a little, but it's still very good!" What do you mean? Like make it smaller? Or bigger?

Work on the mouth a little, but it's still very good!

felilia said: "Be-yoo-ti-full shading " Thanks! :D

Be-yoo-ti-full shading