ramunesin said: "Good, good. There's just some things to point out. Her right arm is coming out of her shoulder joint the wrong way. It looks as if it is extending forwards, creasing back, and then resting on her hip. I think you curved the cloth the wrong way. It hugs the arm in the inverse of the current curve I think. Also, you could work on her left hand. It looks rushed and it does not look like it is grabbing the staff. Her legs also seem a little chubby, but I'm not sure. Overall, nice jo

Good, good. There's just some things to point out. Her right arm is coming out of her shoulder joint the wrong way. It looks as if it is extending forwards, creasing back, and then resting on her hip. I think you curved the cloth the wrong way. It hugs the arm in the inverse of the current curve I think. Also, you could work on her left hand. It looks rushed and it does not look like it is grabbing the staff. Her legs also seem a little chubby, but I'm not sure. Overall, nice job. And, how come

Rather than a seductive look the NPC has a mature look with a child like ebullience twist.

Can't wait for the colored version! :D

I think the pic's being stretched because I used my camera to take the picture lol better resolution here: link

I'm sorry but your drawing is prettier than the npc. Some things though : giant boobs and awkward looking pinky on the right hand.

She's hot... lol pun...

this is nice, just the head is really small o.o