Lol you fixed the panel 3 and 4 chat problem.

Zukari said: "That... guy... speaks... with... too... many... pauses." Maybe he's just really old. -~- Nice comic. Looking forward to see what happens next. :D

I don't think many people understand how to fix the "chat order" problem, in which you can't read the comic from left to right, top to bottom (Like for example, here it's middle, left, to right) This is how you fix it 1. Figure out if you can switch the posiition of the character, maybe have him sitting on the left, and have the briefcase guy come in from the right 2. Make a whole new panel, with the lord guy talking first, and the second panel having the suitcase guy respond. I liked how you fi

Lol that guy on the right has girl hair

use good names not like Horriz! Fazar! . WHAT IS THIS, YO MAMA LAND ?

only one piece of criticism its kind of hard to read from middle to left to right. so organize speech. otherwise, gj!

HEY!...that guy speaks like me... ... what the hell that means =C ...

That... guy... speaks... with... too... many... pauses.

I prefer strategies and wits rather than just plain battlefield

Look at the manly boy with the red robe. How MANLY is that?

i like this one :d