chromeheart said: ""if somebody has to die today, it must be your time".......... your time? or "you" and pretty sure that gun was black, and his hand was like light beige o.o.......... why it turn brown and white...." its called black and white dude, its an effect. Go get glasses before you try to criticize

"if somebody has to die today, it must be your time".......... your time? or "you" and pretty sure that gun was black, and his hand was like light beige o.o.......... why it turn brown and white....

For some reason, these real life backgrounds always give me chuckles :D Keep em going

DivineKYO said: "do mind readers fall into the category of psychics" YUP! of course

do mind readers fall into the category of psychics

Coax said: "So since he can use telepathy, can he teleport too?" naw, not main character.. OOPS HAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA, Ch-chik! xD I burst out laughter when i was reading that! XDDDD

HAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA, Ch-chik! xD I burst out laughter when i was reading that! XDDDD

You've caught my attention. I'm interested in how you're going to play this out

So since he can use telepathy, can he teleport too?

you mean telekinetic (person who uses telepathy).

AnnaDragon said: "Lol...this was in my story. Except I made my guy fire it back." plagiarizer :O!

Lol...this was in my story. Except I made my guy fire it back.

Lol, Telekinetic.

This reminds me of Darker Than Black. The glowing and red eye changes and all lol.

ptphoenix said: "i like it, but it doesn't seem like the protagonist is too nice..." how about you tune in later and find out how nice he can be =D