Zazaram & the ascent to light - page
Submitted by zazaram
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Comments (15)
Sage1458 12/21/08
It has potential to be a great comic like all others, but perhaps you can give it a rather deeper plot
adventkids 12/21/08
The pet robot I think is his toy. He was a kid so he was practicing on his toys maybe?
asali 12/21/08at least you've mastered the art of ADDING BACKROUNDS
xVedris
That child has some whacked-out hair. Like Yu-Gi-Oh.
Goliath797 12/20/08
Ok, I didn't read any of anybody else's criticism, so this is all my own. If it's a repeat of what everyone else said, you should do it. 1. Copy and pasted characters for panels like the first are just laziness...Unless it's like an army of clones o_o 2. You would think the panel showing his evolution would be more then one panel, or different. At first IThought it was 3 different guys o_O 3. Some grammar errors in the first panel, might wanna touch that up. 4. You would think the guy giving the
JeffreyMahn 12/20/08
longhorns7 said: "Zazaram, isnt that a brand of rice?" That's actually Zataran's, but close.
purpleblah2 12/20/08
Did you model the character after YOURSELF?
longhorns7 12/20/08
Zazaram, isnt that a brand of rice?
wlarien 12/20/08
Pretty interesting start.
pomipomi 12/20/08
Retrospectus said: "That's an interesting comic, Ted. ^^" wat he said
Retrospectus 12/20/08
That's an interesting comic, Ted. ^^
Toxikon ChosenOne1st said: "Interesting, but don't use the characters twice." I didn't notice that until you mentioned it. o.O Perhaps everyone in the Guild of Clerical Magic has a twin? Other than that one small thing, I really like it; keep it up! :D
TayTay581 12/19/08
Why is he killing a pet robot? I don't like that.
ChosenOne1st 12/19/08
Interesting, but don't use the characters twice.
yanno 12/19/08
HA! I like it
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