xVedris said: "Check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, try to use different colors of font, so it's easier to read. " ^ What she said. This has some potential, just a few technical changes, and you could have yourself one good comic. Keep up the good work, I'll be following it.

Subtitles were to hard to read.

um, a pan with eggs still cooking on it? bad weapon, but at least if he gets hurt he can eat something and heal! XD lol

i thought this was crandelmeade

Check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, try to use different colors of font, so it's easier to read.

A little hard to see the words.

Erm, nice but the text are quite hard to read. Gotta stress the eyes. lolz

Hordes of bandits = 2 people oO"

Look out! Eggs!

Look out! He has a spinal chord!

out of all the things they can grab, they grab a pan with eggs still on it and a hammer? and whats with the idea of carrying hammers on the field o.o

Ripped movie title and hard to read.

lol at the ripped movie title pic!

is hard to read

LOL, "coming there way" This is funny...mostly because of how "awesome" it is. Good job ^^