omg its casper the friendly ghost :o!

iHeartJezus said: " Mistichuman: � "What? I'm out of my ghost mode?" that line is not really a good line to use. � Is he holding her by the face? � This is really confusing. At the pace you're moving at (5 panels), you'll take about 7 pages just to explain the first one. � For the last panel, please use two separate panels for the two "people" talking. Otherwise it looks like she's just talking to herself. � So far, I'm seeing this storyline as "Ghost is pedo. Follows around random girls walking

Minochi said: "Danny Phantom! :DD" Omgg, that show rockss :]

Danny Phantom! :DD

lorddemon500 said: "Erm. I'm don't understand how the girl looks so shocked. If she could make the guy get out of his "ghost mode", then why hadn't she done it before? " Because she saw him and shes never seen him before.

Erm. I'm don't understand how the girl looks so shocked. If she could make the guy get out of his "ghost mode", then why hadn't she done it before? Oh, and on the last panel, why doesn't her pose look a little like shes talking to somebody?

iHeartJezus said: " Mistichuman: � "What? I'm out of my ghost mode?" that line is not really a good line to use. � Is he holding her by the face? � This is really confusing. At the pace you're moving at (5 panels), you'll take about 7 pages just to explain the first one. � For the last panel, please use two separate panels for the two "people" talking. Otherwise it looks like she's just talking to herself. � So far, I'm seeing this storyline as "Ghost is pedo. Follows around random girls walking

Mistichuman: � "What? I'm out of my ghost mode?" that line is not really a good line to use. � Is he holding her by the face? � This is really confusing. At the pace you're moving at (5 panels), you'll take about 7 pages just to explain the first one. � For the last panel, please use two separate panels for the two "people" talking. Otherwise it looks like she's just talking to herself. � So far, I'm seeing this storyline as "Ghost is pedo. Follows around random girls walking alone in the street

Was he going to kidnap her? Also, work on your sentence flow. That way, it doesn't sound like really bad acting.

Hope it doesn't turn out too typical with 3412323 fighting scenes of the same thing.

that was random and maybe too small for the first episode

Looks pretty good.. .though it doesnt make a ton of sense o_o work on sentence structure.

No idea what is going on. This makes no sense at all.

Agreed on the "Ghost mode" line. Use something like "What! How can you see/touch/hurt me"

Mystichuman said: "• "What? I'm out of my ghost mode?" that line is not really a good line to use. • Is he holding her by the face? • This is really confusing. At the pace you're moving at (5 panels), you'll take about 7 pages just to explain the first one. • For the last panel, please use two separate panels for the two "people" talking. Otherwise it looks like she's just talking to herself. • So far, I'm seeing this storyline as "Ghost is pedo. Follows around random girls walking alone in the