Touhou story: page 5
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chromeheart 12/09/08
ima laugh if the two are mokou and keine
Im4evercruel
ScarletCode said: " [long response] " Ahaha, let me first apologize if my comment was rude to you. Sorry. More importantly, I'm not really trying to criticize your comic or anything, I actually quite enjoy the plot so far. I was just making guesses at what you could have meant by "mistakes" you've made. Once again, my apologies for any offense I may have accidentally given to you, and good work on the comic, I really like your style of drawing And I don't think I've ever pm'ed you a Touhou-Maple
alecshar 12/09/08
Utsuho please. ;D NUCLEAR LAUNCH DETECTED!
RiteJustice 12/09/08
I didn't read it as I'm not aware of the storyline but hell those are some good drawings!
ScarletCode 12/09/08
Im4evercruel said: "I'm guessing Reimu and Marisa are next? ...[Long comment]... Nevertheless, good work." Oh, wow, I meant like, drawing-wise, panel&page build, and/or text suggestion/mistakes. Not to be rude or out of line, but I get the feeling that you should have been sick of this comic since page 2 if you're that hardcore of a fan. I'm really sorry, but I'm not ZUN, neither are a lot of the other makers of Touhou fan-doujin. This comic or plot isn't entirely to be so serious anyway. I mean
kingwoot13 12/08/08
Lachanator said: "what the hell is with japanese names like these -_-" All has to do with the Japanese alphabet.
Lachanator 12/08/08
what the hell is with japanese names like these -_-
gomchoi 12/08/08
i just realised how can they have a chat? one speaks japanese and the other one speaks English...
KageTsume
The room looks like Eientei... or maybe I'm just playing too much Imperishable Night. I'm going against the norm and expecting Sakuya and Remilia coming up next. Probably not, but might as well make predictions. Im4evercruel said: "If it is Chen referring to Ran, which is unlikely, then the obvious mistake is that Ran doesn't have that power." Chen is Ran's own shikigami, actually. But it said 'Master Yukari', so I'm not too sure.
Yos5 12/08/08
Lucky noob...
Shaniquia 12/08/08
"i don't know why, but i feel strange " he said, after waking up with three girls surrounding him. ...hmmmm isn't that normal for boys when they wake up? lulz
DarkxChibi 12/08/08
Looks good so far O; Only thing bothering me are the cat ears though ._____.; Dunno why but they look kinda odd...
gomchoi 12/08/08
im guesing yuyuko and youmu(maybe) or reimu and marisa youkais can do nearly anything with their own abilitys
EgrazCarn 12/08/08
great art and story. keep this going! :3
Im4evercruel
I'm guessing Reimu and Marisa are next? And regarding your previous comic, at least from what I recall, neither youkai nor humans can follow Yukari through her gaps.. nor can they be brought.. so how did the beginner get pulled into Gensokyo? (Perhaps this was one of your mistakes?) Edit2: FYI: Chen's last name is not Yakumo. In fact she does not even have a last name. I would change that in the next comic. Edit3: Also, the more I re-read this comic, the more bothersome the contradictory plot be
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