The storyline's okay, but it's not our first time hearing about "A demon." The way the demon talks, it's pretty lame. The hissing sound is overused, showing lack of creativity. And the story is stiff. One second the guy smacks her in the face, the next they're best friends.

duderok said: "The shemale is annoying me." oooooh i think it was sandra that got her hair cut off o_o took me a while to notice that.

The shemale is annoying me.

That dude got pimp slapped.

sure, punch the one with a gun, you'll live.

Not bad. Though I would think the light generated from fire and lightening would be a little more than that.

skink said: "I have to squint my eyes to see the pictures" There are pictures? What panel?

I have to squint my eyes to see the pictures

weipu said: "nice. [endsarcasm/] next time maybe enable us to read this crap without needing to glare at it?" The writing is fine. Unless you can't read of course. Its the background but the last time I checked you don't have to read that. Anyways. Keep your stupid comments to yourself.

nice. [endsarcasm/] next time maybe enable us to read this crap without needing to glare at it?

There beat on each other then they talk like nothing happened o.o lulswut?

this sucks

Kind of dark, I understand that's kind of the point but it makes it difficult to see whats going on.

Lachanator said: "elves, not elvessss" Terrence is hissing. On another note, sorry for the poor lighting but it's supposed to be midnight. Next page will be morning though so don't worry.

elves, not elvessss