hey the noob is helping u ur new best friend does he get paid to do that?

Thanks for all the comments. Just for your information, I'm dutch, my grammar isn't anywhere near perfect; I know that and I can't make it perfect either. Thanks for pointing it out, but one person saying it should be enough to make me realize I used incorrect grammar... ._. Also, this won't be a drama comic. Don't forget this is the prologue, where the current situation is explained and therefor has a lot of text. Now you know what the comic's about, it'll be less reading and some more action.

Drama, humor and very pretty to look at

i loled SOOOO much at the last two panels xD ScoobertyDoo said: "Lmao. You got me in the last panel. x] Anywho, it's not so bad! Just work on your grammatical errors next time. Grammar can play a huge part in a comic, believe it or not." yah... but just home-person made, cus Those in stores have offen wrong grammar and most dont think that much about it xD

I really like it so far just one thing. "worst and worst" part should be "I feel worse and worse." just some grammer help

Go save someone's ass from a buildling. link

that noob guy doesnt laugh at him. +1 Friend

It's a little hard to read. Just a tad.

Please use different speech bubbles, and maybe some plainer text. The comic is really pretty.

on topic: well it was ok i guess but at the end you just are like uhh.... maybe you should have left that out

I like it a lot! XD However, I think you should really go for just action and not try any humour, to really narrow the focus.

Cut off the wings? Anyways, the comic seems good, just dont mess it up. Continue please

good job.please continue :}

Haha, Nice. It seems promising, but try to improve your grammar a bit. And maybe make the font a big bigger? (In the first 3 panels) But keep it up, I wanna see what happens next.^^

Lmao. You got me in the last panel. x] Anywho, it's not so bad! Just work on your grammatical errors next time. Grammar can play a huge part in a comic, believe it or not.