Cygnus thief looks lame =( I mean, ur draw looks awesome, but the NPC looks lame =

The 3rd guy looks like one of those char in Night Of The Zodiac. O_O

Icies said: "Ooh, very nice.x3 Just two things, try to make their chins less pointy, And try to fix the 3rd girl's eyes so they're not so lopsided. But really, this is a good draw.XD" the third one is the warrior of light. ( hes a guy) anyways. nice drawing besides the chin and how flat it looks. could improve with shading to give a 3d look. Nice work, good luck on sending more for us plz.

Icies said: "Ooh, very nice.x3 Just two things, try to make their chins less pointy, And try to fix the 3rd girl's eyes so they're not so lopsided. But really, this is a good draw.XD" That 3rd person is a guy :o!

Ooh, very nice.x3 Just two things, try to make their chins less pointy, And try to fix the 3rd girl's eyes so they're not so lopsided. But really, this is a good draw.XD

Man, I was going to try and draw them.......

I like the drawing. Seems like those pics we're it's you & your buddies, in a picture that's like being taken by your mom...when you don't want to be in it. Anyways, awesome drawing, guy on the far right looks a bit dumbfounded, and Mr.IWearAMaskBecauseItMakesMeSeemMoreDarkDueToTheFactThatImAThief has his mask all weird looking...think it's the Lips. Anyways, great job! 8/10

The faces put me off. The thief is 4/3rd's the size of the bowman, shoulder width wise and sketchy lines should be erased. Overall 8/10.

Old timey prince, A jester, and what appears to be a depressed knight? heh, great drawings, small details on the clothing is excellent. I dunno maybe the arms could be more...notable.

I think these are really nice, I just think that the first two are kind of "wobbley" looking. The character on the far right is a bit stiff, but for some reason, I like that one most. >:B

At Jointed, thanks very much! It's been a while since I've been concritted. Replying to your paragraphs, in order... I agree, normal people (especially men) don't have pointy chins like I draw 'em. XD My feminine men problem, methinks. Nope, he was just frowning. Heh, my femininity problem again. I promise you, I shall practice! The next picture (unless my Cygnus Gals pic *Basil screams in terror* gets posted, then the picture after that one) will be better, and if it isn't, please smack me with

alecshar said: "So... What exactly is "cygnus" anyways...? I'm kinda behind in things... =S" It's a new series of classes that is currently being tested in the KMS Tespis server. What you do is when you reach any of the 2nd job advances (Archer's 2nd job advance, Pirate's 2nd job advance etc. etc.), instead of becoming that designated class (Hunter/Crossbow Man), you become a "Knight of Cygnus". Not much is known about it, but it's something like they're max level is level 120, and they gain 6 A

alecshar said: "So... What exactly is "cygnus" anyways...? I'm kinda behind in things... =S" New class in KMS. Here . Or here .

So... What exactly is "cygnus" anyways...? I'm kinda behind in things... =S

Great. Interesting style. This is just my opinion, but I think it'd look better if their chins were dulled just a little bit so they're not completely pointy, but it does't have to be so blunt to be like.. a U xD The furthest the right ->, his eyes seem a little lopsided. Unless he was trying to make some sort of face, then perhaps you could have it similar to the guy on the left, and have his eyebrows sort of hint at that? I do like the guy on the right's eyes the best, though. Their shoulders